I'm re-doing a thing · 1:28pm Oct 29th, 2015
I'm going back and heavily revising There Will Always Be Light. So along with my new story I will be publishing my redone version of that story.
The reason is Equestria Daily would like to change some things. Admittedly not that many things, but there will be a few big changes in the way it's worded.
Equestria Daily told you what they wanted changed? I could have sworn that they stopped doing that. Mind if I ask what it was?
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Less ly adverbs (more subtle with emotional context), more variety in sentance structure, more consistent character voicing, and the occasional grammar tweak.