Revised and Ready to go!

I am happy to inform you that the first chapter of Hotel California has been revised after getting feedback from the Equestria Daily pre-reader (a big thanks goes out to whoever you are)! If accepted to EQD (and possibly even if it's not accepted), it will be posted on here! I'm sorry it took so long to revise, but the past weeks have been torture. Maintaining a social life, editing, Boy Scouts, and school is an awful lot to do. Also, I'd like to give a big shout out to the people who edited, pre-read, and did art for the story! Here they are:
Editors:
Fire Gazer the Alchemist
Manaphy
RK_Striker_JK_5
Von Snootingham
That one random EQD Pre-Reader who helped out!
Pre-Readers:
Foals Errand
River Road
Coverart: 2135D
Additional Art: PaintSplotch

You all should totally go out and check out their stories! Except for Random EQD Pre-Reader... I don't know where I could link them at exactly... Thanks anyway, though! (Even if you'll probably never read this blog. Soon! Soon this story shall be posted! I cannot wait!
—Stahl

Comments

[Manaphy]

Glad I could help, Stahl. I'm eager to read the released version when it's out!

[Fire Gazer the Alchemist]

#somuchhype

But seriously, looking forward to seeing this story in all it's edited glory.

[RK_Striker_JK_5]

Also glad to help, Stahl. Almost any time. ;)

[Stahl]

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I can assure both of you that it's had a bit of changes since you've last seen it
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I'm only responding at your request is this good enough?

[RK_Striker_JK_5]

3482642 I suppose it is. :p ;)

[Stahl]

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7 outta 10. Needs moar pone emotes.