scene from ILOE Chap 8

"Keep moving!" The commandos ran behind cover to keep from getting shot. "Find cover!"

"Rally around me!" "Let's get out of here!" "Turn around and fight!" "Run for your lives!" The officers orders confused the Lennex soldiers to the point of confusion.

"Cover me, I'm reloading!" "Bazooka, over here!" "Grenade!" "Pour it into them!" "Get that MG set up!" The Imperials didn't show any mercy to their Lennex counterparts. What made the raid worse for the Lennex Empire was that their fuel and ammo supply was specifically targeted and destroyed.

Honestly, I'd say it could be fleshed out some more.

Let's hear the opinions.