Oct
2nd
2015
Going back and revising "One More Dance" · 5:36pm Oct 2nd, 2015
Fast as lightning, sharp as a sword
I have decided to go back and revise my old story, "One More Dance", to fix a few dialogue and punctuation errors, and the occasional syntax arrangement. It will look a lot more professional after this. Also, I've been thinking of responding to a request to add on an alternate ending scene in which the story does not end happily. What do you think?
Also, there's another fun surprise waiting for this story. I'll fill you in later! 
Stay quick, stay sharp, and thanks for reading!
The reason why I enjoyed your story so much and faved it was because I can relate to the feeling of hopeless depression. This story and its happy ending made me feel good at a time when such feelings were a rarity (pun intended
) for me. I didn't notice any obvious grammatical or spelling errors and thought the story looked professional anyway. In other words, I like the story as it is and wholeheartedly object to an unhappy alternate ending.
3437607 I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm even gladder that it was able to help you so much.
But I have gotten the same request on three separate occasions, so it's not entirely out of the question for me. And if I do decide on it, it won't be the canonical ending. As for the revising, I tended to use excessive ellipses and punctuate dialogue incorrectly, so that's what I'll be fixing. If anything else would be changed, it would be very, very minor. 