A Game Of Kings is on EQD! · 12:45am Sep 25th, 2015
It has taken a lot of work, but now A Game of Kings and Pretty Pony Princesses is on EQD! I'm so happy my hard work will reach a much bigger audience.
But I couldn't have done it alone. Here are the people that helped me achieve this:
AlicornPriest
AlicornPriest has been my editor since January. I first tried writing this story by myself (with absolutely no experience) and it was pure garbage (and I still have the downvotes to prove it). I asked Ali for help and help he did. At his suggestions, I read a few books about writing (this one has been rather helpful) made spreadsheets and nearly 100 pages of character and story notes. He has also helped me with editing and being a proofreader. There are many points where my story would have stumbled if he hadn't caught it for me.
Basically, he's a godsend.
QuillpenTheStoryteller
My proofreader. He's been with me since chapter 4 and has been good at giving me critiques about what he thought of the chapters and where they could be improved.
Daemon of Decay
Proofreader for many chapters. He's been good at pointing out how to improve chapters and fix some grammar and word choices.
Abcron
Abcron has helped with editing and proofreading on certain chapters.
TheWraithWriter
TheWraithWriter was a proofreader early on. Gave some of the funniest feedback.
Ravencrofte
This guy needs more love. Have you read Epic of a Diamond Dog? It is an awesome adventure story that needs more love. Go read it and comment on it. It's an adventure story that grips you by the throat and doesn't let go. It was so good it inspired me to finally take an active role in producing content for others, and thus Lost_Marbles became a writer. He also gave me a bit of writing advice.
enti0, HapHazred, The Dapper Guy, TheBandBrony
These four have written reviews about my story that have helped me learn where the story could be improved and also pointed out where the story was the strongest. I am very happy that I've been able to learn so much about this story and how other people experience it through them.
Pusspuss
Pusspuss has recommended some art books that have been helpful. He also does livestreams of art I watched occasionally to see how someone who can really draw works.
The EQD Prereaders
If they never gave this story a chance, some of you may not be seeing this right now.
Congratulations!
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We both made it! ((Now I won't have to follow through with my plot to murder you I made in a jealous rage
Sweet shit, ya deserves it!
Congrats!