Hiatus Touch-Ups - Fahrenheit's Rewriting - Degrees. · 4:29pm Aug 28th, 2015
So many of my stories have fallen under hiatus.
So let me tell you where I stand on stories of mine.
Many of them are under hiatus, and each of them with an unforeseeable future.
They'll be updated, not shortly, but they will.
As for Fahrenheit, I believe I backed myself into a mental corner where that's concerned. I'd might have to redo the story-arc, because I found myself disinterested in it and one of my editors voiced their concerns about it being out of their range of romance as far as they see. I personally combed over the story and found that it more or less very confusing and executed very poorly. I promised it would be clearer in the next chapter, but as I write this chapter: I found that I had no where to go but Trixie's death or her being pulled out of the snow and faced with her sin.
That is a mistake, my first sin.
Next, my lack of progress with updating chapters. I've been very busy with life and personal situations. I'm diagnosed ADHD, which is medicated and allows me to write without distraction, and it's explained why I'm so very busy with jumping from one story to the next. I'm juggling literary chainsaws, with stories that I desperately want feedback on and stories that I need to get finished. So many ideas brimming in my head, but only a select amount of time to write each of them.
That's my second one, my second sin.
I personally apologize for the inconvenience of time spent for my volunteer editors, Phaoray and Spirit Shift, for the time spent on Fahrenheit but it's being rewritten to fit more of the romance segment with the same plot but better story telling. Trust me on this one, it won't take four chapters of exposition to get the story in gear and for it to be completely confusing story-telling. The new plot I'm forming is one for everyone, but a more compelling digging truth for the thoughtful, more attention to detail readers.
And while I'm at it, let me tell you the plot without spoilers:
Degrees
The Author of Her Fate
Part One: Fahrenheit| Trixie looses her memories of a year's worth of a relationship with Twilight, under mysterious causes in a very peculiar setting: Equestria is suffering it's coldest temperature drop ever recorded.
With the taste of Trixie's defeat, after the conflict with the Alicorn Amulet, still sour in her mind: she wants nothing to do with Twilight Sparkle. However, a greater force of an Resistant Movement targets Trixie's head, believing she only gotten together with Twilight for political reasons. A mob, if you will, if Trixie was ever to break Twilight's heart. So Trixie is left with the choice of pretending to be Twilight's lover in exchange for her freedom, or leave it all behind with the rage of goddesses following her where-ever she goes?
A greater force, the Author of Fates, moves in to reveal the full story of the year behind Trixie, working with the dazed mare to find out why Trixie looses her memory instead of what Trixie's missing.
Part Two: Celsius| Not available due to spoilers.
Part Three: Kelvins| Not Yet Written, but not available due to spoilers