Responding to comments · 8:17pm Aug 1st, 2015
Wow! I never expected this but Equestria's Rifleman has been featured. Considering it's so popular I'll put my other story on the back burner for you guys. Expect the next chapter with in the month.
Also, since I got 40+ comments I'll be responding to as many as I can here. I'm not going to name names I'm sure you know who you are.
First grammar and spelling, I am not an English expert and I've always believed that if you want perfection then you shouldn't be here. However, this does not mean I will not fix a problem especially if it slipped through the cracks of editing. I did say I would accept constructive criticism, I just don't want people to be over critical.
Yes there will be more. Please stop asking.
This is not a crossover, I would think the lack of a crossover tag would have made that obvious. I had never even heard of Sniper Elite before this, I just chose that picture because I thought it was cool. Also, kudos to the guy or gal who spotted what was wrong with the picture. I was wondering how long it would take for someone to point it out.
I also thought that the cover art would show what rifle David was using. I was going to say in the next chapter, but I'm going to tell you now. It is a Mosin-Nagant specifically a 91/30 I own one myself and I love it and would recommend getting to anyone. But if you have to spent $300 or more you're paying too much. Hell, I payed $250 and that may have been too much.
Children and meat shields, not two things I would have put together on my own, and I got two little sisters so maybe...
I'm kidding I not that screwed up.
Yeah, it my be a little (or a lot) fast paced but I was trying to get out of a slump. If you check out my other story you'll see large gaps in updates. I'll try to make it better in the future.
“Remember it's your choice to read this. Don't like it? It's your fault.” This is meant for the people who dislike human and/or anthro stores. Sometimes it seems like people don't even read the tags before hand. If you dislike the story for other reasons then fine, you're entitled to you opinion, but if you dislike it because you're an asshole, then you're an asshole and I have nothing more to say to you.
Who's to say Equestria doesn't have prepackaged food? Not to mention Applebloom saw a lot more bags of the stuff, so she would probably be able to figure it out.
Zecora introducing David to them? Okay that was a bit of an over site. But better than my original idea of keeping David in the forest til the end of season 4. But assuming she did offer to introduce him, David still would have declined. Like I said he is more alien than Zecora and he doesn’t know how they would reacted, so better safe them sorry.
Finally the C-130 and the vans will be explained, at a later date. Until then the characters will only speculate and theorize as to how these things got there.
cool I can't wait for more. It's really good.
I too have a Mosin, and I love it. I paid 200 for it. My coworker, who I bought it from, also included a Case, Monte Carlo Black resin stock, a few hundred rounds, and several Stripper Clips. I didn't install the stock because it's Heavier than the Wood stock, and I prefer the wood look.
I look forward to reading your story, it's in my Read it later list. A list I can say is shrinking every day.
Awsome sause. Cant wait.
works for me
Who's going to be his lucky mare?
3288956 The one who as their own character tag.