Anyone interested in providing feedback for an experimental horror story?

So, I have a horror story that was originally a comedy. In fact the first readthrough is a comedy, and the second read through should be a horror. It makes use of a mechanic that I have never seen utilized to the effect I used it and I want someone who both likes horror and is as least aware of Cthulhu mythos to give me some feedback. It isn't' Cthulhu but it was inspired by it in part. If you don't know Cthulhu at all but are interested I still want feedback so please message me because I would appreciate it. However I will only send the link to people who ask and can review it on a computer as the formatting won't work for phones.

-Piquo

Edit: I should mention the story is complete, sans edits, and at 2,500 words for FIMFiction's count.

Comments

[Winston]

I'll take a look at it.

[Piquo Pie]

3268003
There innovate in terms of content but not the best written. That said I just want someone who knows of it.

3267903
I sent a lint to both of you.