A Slight Delay on Chapter 3

Hello everyone. Sorry for the delay of chapter 3 of "You Brighten My Day". My father had to go in the hospital for surgery earlier this week, and my mother and I needed to be there for him. Everything turned out fine, but I was notably delayed in working on chapter 3.

Also I think I let some of the off comments get to me. I think I know why some of the dialogue and parts of my story were so stilted. I was being overly critical of my craft and thus it translated into my story. I momentarily forgot the great advice I was given by a fellow writer on here: "While it's nice to have the approval of others, and a thrill to entertain them...it's always important to write for yourself and what you personally like." I think I got so wrapped up in worrying about this being what others would like, that I almost forgot to make sure it's something I would like.

Right now I am going strong on Chapter 3. It will be a little while yet till it's ready. But it will be worth the wait. Thank you all for your continued support. Hopefully Chapter 3 will be the best addition to this story yet! I will continue to give it my all!

Have a great weekend everyone!

- Jaydex

Comments

[HenryAnthonyCourtler]

I wish you the best of luck with Chapter 3! Don't stress yourself out too hard though.

[Dnar Semaj]

Thanks. I hope your Dad gets better ASAP.

[Pia]

I hope your dad recovers quickly!
But this just means.
I have to wait.
AND PLAY THE WAITING GAME.
I eagerly await for the next chapter.

[Ag3nt_T]

Good thing that your dad is going to be okay. That saying is something powerful to follow. Never stray from it.

[iloveportalz0r]

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