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TheCrimsonDM


Big fan of fantasy and lesbians. If you want magic, lesbians, or ponies, you've come to the right place. Follow me itch.io if you want to see my visual novels. https://thecrimsondm-vanillia.itch.io/

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  • 42 weeks
    wow, nine years already huh?

    It was nine years ago i began posting stories on fimfiction, nine years to the date for the first chapter of Heart of Stone. I can't believe how much I've done in that time. Writing fanfictions, drawing comics, finally making visual novels and games (which was one of my dreams) and even publishing my own original books.

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  • 53 weeks
    Heart of Magic Ending

    howdy folks

    it's been far too long, but at long last this story is in fact over. And with it, what is probably the single longest project i've done in terms of word count. a rough estimation is over 700k words from heart of stone to the end of heart of magic. But no matter how long or short, its been a blast to work on it and finish it.

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  • 73 weeks
    Trixie is Pregnant and the world is ending!

    Well i did not expect to actually finish this today. Well it's a bit of a short ending, I'm sorry to say but it's an ending. Not a lot of fanfictions tend to get endings and I knew I wanted to finish this one. It's been a blast making this and though I'm not too sure what my next fan project will be, I will make more stuff.

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  • 73 weeks
    Chapter Sixty Six is out!

    Chapter SIxty Six is finally here, never fear for the Bubble Queen is near!
    edit: correction up to chapter sixty nine is out. there might be one more chapter in the near future.

    chapter link

    and as always thanks for reading XD

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  • 74 weeks
    Chapter Sixty Five is Out!

    Hello
    Here is another chapter in the adventures of a half crazed pregnant are and her unwitting fiance

    chapter link

    Honestly this is probably one of my favorite chapters I've written. It's just so bubbly. Sometimes I look at this old story, and just scratch my head wondering how I could make things that were so chaotic?

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Jun
23rd
2015

Heart of Stone: anyone want to be a pre-reader/ proof-reader? · 5:00pm Jun 23rd, 2015

As many of you who have read the comment section of The Trixie and Maud: Heart of Stone story will know. I don't have any editor's, pre readers, or proof readers for the story. I have some wonderful people who help me out in the comment section, but I've been wanting somebody to be able to review my chapters before I post them so that I can fix any error's, story wise or other, before posting.

If anyone is interested, you should know that I have a few things I'm looking for in an proofreader. I am willing to work with somebody on these, so no worries.

1. I am sorry, but I really don't want to go back and edit my story all the way from chapter one. I am aware of some of my large blunders but I really don't want to go back and edit 200k words.

2. I'm also trying to finish this project soon, so that I can begin work on my next big Trixie story. So I don't want to wait too long between chapter posts. (if it took too long, I might just forget important elements of the story.) I understand people's schedules so I can work with you on these. My aim would be a chapter once every week or two, and since the chapters are generally pretty small it shouldn't be too much of a hassle... I hope.

3. Grammar may be important, but what I'm really looking for is someone to help me tell a better story. So large focus on the story itself.

With all this being said, if anyone is interested, please let me know. Again I am totally willing to work with somebody on the above. Feel free to comment or PM me. Thanks again for hearing me out. XD

ps, if we can work something out, I might even be willing to draw a picture for the new editor. This is totally not a bribe, it's more like an incentive.

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Your update speed scares me on occasion, but if you are planning to dial it back to once every week or two, I'm game for working with you on this. :trixieshiftleft:
I've got a little bit of experience with proofreading and editing, but not much.

3174611 You've really helped me out in the comment section, so yeah this would be great. Thanks for this. XD

I would not mind helping you with the story side of things. I will be frank. As far as grammar goes if Pages or Word do not catch it than its not important to me. :derpytongue2:

I like this ship a lot and feel like its one of the more unique ones on this site. My two cents on character development, story arcs, and pacing would be what I would offer. :twilightsmile:

3176638 Thanks for the offer, I got things covered with Crowscrowcrow though, so no worries. XD

3176886 cool gotcha. Well if you ever need an extra set of eyes let me know I'd be happy to help.

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