My oc cinna sprinkle · 10:35pm Jun 21st, 2015
Basics
Name: Cinna Sprinkle
Nickname(s): Cinna
Gender: Female
Species: Unicorn
Age: 17
Birthday: Unknown
Sexuality: Straight
Allegiance: Free spirit
Appearance
Body color: Light creamy brown
Body type: Thin
Mane color/style: Wavy sparkley milk color
Markings (Stripes, spots, whatever): none
Eyes: Sky Blue
Cutie mark: Cinnamon roll with a halo
Accessories: None
Height (Equines are almost always measured in hands): 7 hands
Weight: 95 lbs
Notable features: Her large beautiful eyes
Other: red lips
Personality
Personality in general: Very sweet and loves everyone
Fatal flaw: None
Likes: Big Mac, her friends, cinnamon rolls, cupcakes
Dislikes: Cherilee
Favorite food: ...
Favorite book: the lusty argonian maid
Favorite pony: Big Mac
Favorite animal: Rabbit
Favorite song: Idk
Favorite place: Twilights howse
Other favorites:
Everyone
Least favorite Food: Cherry
Other least favorites:
Daily life
Place of residence: Celestia's castle
Occupation: Baker
Talents: Making cinnamonrolls and magic
Hobbies: Hanging with big mac and the mane 6
Friends and family
Mother: Deceased
Father: Deceased
Siblings: None
Other relatives: Princess celestia
Lover/spouse: Big mac
Offspring: None
Friends: Everyone
Enemies: Cherilee
Pets: None
Magic (Skip if your OC doesn’t use magic)
Powers: Celestial magic where she can deflect differebt attacks and can takl to animals
How do they use them?
Do they like using magic? Yes
Why or why not? Because is fun
Flying (Skip if your OC doesn’t fly)
Wings:
Wingspan:
Top flying speed:
Does your character like flying?
Why or why not?
Do they use flying in their daily life?
Other info
Backstory/past: was abused by her parents until they died abd she mived to ponyville and met big mac who became her lover. Other guys loved her but she chose big mac
Theme song:
Quote:
Any other info on your character:
Nice
3168950 Thanks *Nuzzles*
why specify sexuality?
3168953 I use a templatr
Quite a bit of information. It'd be cool to do a collaboration with you
3168951 my pleasure *nuzzles back*
3168956 ?
3168962 What?
Um, pretty nice but, does she have any flaws???
And how can she love and care for everypony if Cheerilee is her enemy???
Sounds like a cool Character
3169046 Yeh her flaw is that she likes evryone except Cherilee
3169150
How is that a flaw?!
Sorry, but this character screams Mary Sue a bit to me.
3169152 What?
Is that a hunger games reference?
3169161 ?
i'vr nevr read the hunger games
3169163 oh Cinna is the name of a character in it
3169159 Sorry, but this character is a bit Mary Sue, at least to me.
You say she's beautiful, and a royal baker, and the only flaw she has is that she dislikes Cheerilee, which is not a flaw. Not everyone will like everyone else and they usually have a reason therefore not a flaw. Meaning she has no flaws, she's beautiful, and she has a job as somepony closish to royalty.
3169167 is having a mary sue bad?
3169174 *sigh* Google it.
I know a few Mary Sue tests that may help identify some problems of what makes a character Mary Sue or Gary Stu
3169182 Why are you sighing
3169188 Because you don't know what it is. Just google it.
Would you be interested in the tests?
3169189 ok but it kinda rude to sigh like im stupid
3169190 I also sigh because you were not aware that your character did seem a bit of a Mary Sue, I did not mean to be rude.
So, have you googled it?
Are you interested in these tests?
3169195 ok whuch test should i tske
3169200 I have some for writers. One I like is this one,
I found some others
One
Two
Three
3169210 Cinna Sprinkle is only a little like you. She isn't really very cool: she blends into crowds, she hangs out on the fringes at parties, and wearing shades after dark makes her run into things. She may have sometimes thought that she was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. She's come in for her share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever she gains, she's worked for.
In general, you care deeply about Cinna Sprinkle, but you're smart enough to let her stand on her own, without burdening her with your personal fantasies or propping her up with idealization and over-dramatization. Cinna Sprinkle is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of her.
Total: 35
3169223 Cool, so on those aspects she is not mary sue.
Looks like you got the basics of an OC covered, I hope you will, in time, fill in the gaps this character sheet shows.
May I ask why you/Cinna have/has a "little" crush for Big Mac?
3169210
these Mary Sue tests are pretty handy, thanks for posting them
3169849 Your welcome. It's not hard to find them, yo just really need you google 'Mary Sue test' or a Mary Sue test for a specific purpose like writing or RPing