My original Fanfic

Okay so as most of you (my followers) know my original fan fic that I published wasn't very well executed, but sticking to a few of the original plot lines I had in mind for it I have refurbished and improved by correcting most of the errors (not going to say all as I probably missed a few grammatical as I am dividing my time between about twenty different things these days) and redid one of the main characters since. If you have read it and stopped because of the alicorn in the begging that could breath fire, well now he is no longer an OP as Hell SOB but has been greatly toned down, though using his talisman he is still able to levitate things and as a natural ability summon the dead to aid him (though that in itself has been greatly nerfed as it not only drains him but he can only manage about two to four at a time ) since he does still have a history as one of Hades servants which may or may not come into the fic later on.

I'm also working on updating the cover art so that it is more accurate to the ponies that it revolves around in the Fanfic thus placing the characters in their armor. If anyone is interested in working with me on that I have sketched rough drafts though they are mere front and side views with details of abilities as I am horrible at drawing an in action scene. If you want to help comment below or message me as I leave the site up and check it every day.

Thanks to you for reading this and I hope I improved it in your eyes cause I know I've improved it significantly in mine.

P.S. If you have any questions feel free to ask them and I will get back when I can.