Revamp at: 80% Completion · 5:05am Jun 6th, 2015
Hey everypony! Patriotic Pony here, with some fantastic and long-awaited news!
IT'S FINALLY HERE! The Revamp of Chapter Four is finally, FINALLY done and published! Nearly 2,000 more words, more chemistry between characters, more tension between characters, more comedy, better comedy, better descriptions and imagery, better dialogue, a better setup for Chapter Five, and all-around a better chapter than before. In every way, and improvement over the original, just two hits shy of 800 views!
Guys, I can't thank you enough. You've all been so patient this past year, putting up with my delays and drama and all of my crap, reading all the depressing stuff I posted here for no good reason, waiting for me to finally get my rear in gear. There are no words to describe how I feel right now... besides maybe relieved and tired. Just one more chapter to go, and then we're done! One more chapter, one more revamp, and then we can finally, FINALLY get to Chapter Six! Thank you all so much, for everything! This means so much to me, and I know it means a lot to Swift that we've finally made it this far! Speaking of whom, thank you endlessly, Swift; you're the man!
One more chapter to revamp, and then it all begins... here we go!
That's all for now, Patriotic Pony out!
