Announcement: Temptation (Must) Wait (A Few More Days) · 2:20pm May 28th, 2015
So, one of my two pre-readers has gotten back to me about Temptation Waits. They brought up several very good points, so once my other editor has read the chapter, I'll be moving it to the Cutting Room Floor and heavily revising and adding onto certain sections, as I got so wrapped up in describing certain aspects of the story that I neglected others. Furthermore, I realized on my own that the chapter kind of veers off on a needless tangent near the end, so I'll be trying to reel that in considerably. Once the finalized chapter goes up, I'll also publish the current draft on Cutting Room Floor for those who are interested. I may also need to go back and make some changes to the first chapter, but those will be fairly minor.