Thoughts on the New Chapters

Underwhelming considering how longs its been, I know. That's one of the reason why it took so long to finish. That and some personal stress regarding my school work and my social life. I also feel very out of practice. Hopefully things will be able to get more exciting soon.

Comments

[SageBrony07]

Did not alot for people leave a comment about the new chapter? If not sorry. I thought it was pretty good. I loved the development with Wasp and the info about what is going one with the Changelings. Good luck with the next chapters. I hope school work gets easier for you.

[Dash Attack]

3094209 Thank you. People were worried I was writing Wasp out of the story, so I decided to speed up his return to the party. I also decided to throw yet another wrench at our protagonist by showing that the changelings are down but not out of the game. I'm sure there will be more comments. My guess is that many of the people tracking haven't realized a new chapter is up. The last update was October after all. That's the longest I've ever gone without adding to MMBB.

[Kamunari]

I thought the new chapter was fine, in hindsight maybe Twilight's reaction to hearing her brother was alive could have made the scene with Luna a bit better. But other than that I felt for as short as it was it was fine. I'm willing to help in the future, so PM me if you need a fresh pair of eyes.

[Dash Attack]

3095046 Most definitely!