Update on Hunted Revision · 1:56am May 14th, 2015
Hey guys,
So the revision of the first chapter is taking a bit longer than I expected it would. I'll hopefully get it up within a day or so. Thought I'd post this first so you guys can absorb some of the new ideas that I have created for it and give me some feedback. Here are just two of the ideas I've already put in. Note: If you don't want to read the ideas, you don't have to.
- Sunset Shimmer will have a more inclusive part in the story than what she had in the original.
- Anon meets the Dazzlings in a different way than in the original.
What do ya'll think of these two? Good? Bad? I'm also trying to help with explaining the friendship between Anon and Sunset and the reason why they seem to be best friends in A New Beginning.
I like both ideas they sound like there lot of story building that can happen I look forward to reading it
3068328 Agreed. This is supposed to be the fanfic equivalent to an HD remastering. Go for it.
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Glad ya'll think they're good ideas.