R4 (Reactions, Reviews, Reference, Redirection) #0161 · 10:32pm May 13th, 2015
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Here are five slightly edited old reviews:
Johnny Never Knew What Hit Him by Horse Voice
Weeping Fire by Civviq Writer
Servant of Chaos by Yukito
Prologue: A New Life by Super_Big_Mac
Mush Story by Dafaddah
Johnny Never Knew What Hit Him by Horse Voice
[story link] [my original review]
Starts a bit cliche, but the ending was interesting. Not in my top ten for the contest, but I’d recommend it. Another story where the human in question focuses on the fact that the ponies have really big eyes. Which seems like an odd thing to put the focus on, that cartoon characters have unaturally large eyes. I mean, that’s like the most realistic thing about the MLP ponies.
Weeping Fire by Civviq Writer
[story link] [my original review]
Well, this story doesn’t have a dull premise. And now I’m out of nice things to say about it. The author seems to have been trying to be witty and/or clever, but didn’t get anywhere near pulling it off successful. Would not recommend.
Servant of Chaos by Yukito
[story link] [my original review]
A bit simple, but it had an interesting idea at the core of it. If you don’t mind the rough writing and slightly odd first-person perspective, you might give this a try. Certainly gave me some fuel for my headcanon about the discord era of history.
Prologue: A New Life by Super_Big_Mac
[story link] [my original review]
This story earns points for ambition and creativity, just not a lot of them. I’d rate it as decent, but nowhere near great. Gets a bit too meta (sort of) and rough writing quality in general. Still, not a bad read if you can follow it.
Mush Story by Dafaddah
[story link] [my original review]
Would’ve liked this to have been longer. Needed more time to build up to things. Yet, the ending still had a bit of impact. So I’d call this a pretty good story.
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