My Decision on Hunted · 5:13am May 10th, 2015
Seeing as how many people have said Hunted could use some revising, I've decided to make it happen. The ETA on it can't be determined right now due to my work hours increasing this week, but I'll try to at least get the revised edition of the first chapter up asap. Note that I'll be going into much further detail behind the reason Anon is immune to the Dazzlings' songs, his "shop class incident". The addition of a few more events in between the cafeteria and the big confrontation is certain as, looking back, it seemed a bit rushed on my part.
As for the second chapter, I'll be doing a major overhaul on it. I won't say much so it won't spoil the story, but just know that I'll be getting more in-depth with Anon trying to evade each Dazzling, maybe throwing in a few more comedic moments, along with keeping the one that ya'll like.
That brings me to the third and final chapter. Seeing as how the other two are being remade, I shouldn't leave this one out of the fun. Changes in this one will be minor in comparison to the other two.
But, instead of just editing the original chapters, I'll just go ahead and leave them up for ya'll to enjoy. They'll just have the tag "original" next to them as opposed to the new ones having "revised" next to them. Still, I can't thank ya'll enough for the amount of success that this story and it's sequels have gotten. Thats why I started thinking of revising this story, because ya'll deserve my best in each story and I feel like I can make this story even better. Hopefully, you guys will like the revision.
- Harms Way
Il ike the idea of keeping both the old and new chapters and I look forward to seeing what kind of changes you have in mind
Ooooooooooooooh :3 This will be interesting!