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  • 606 weeks
    Chapter 13

    As you may or may not know, I was on a long Hiatus after I took down Chapter 13 and the Epilogue of Lost Time, but I am proud to say that I am back. I have gone through Chapter 13 and cut or rewrote some parts, but then completely revised the last part of it. The ending is still in production, but it is actually going to be Chapter 14, and then the Epilogue which should finally conclude the

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  • 615 weeks
    Update.

    So a lot of you have been asking to see the omitted chapters so I've decided that I will put them in google docs and link it later today. That way I can give you all who have been waiting something to keep you occupied while I take care of other projects and issues I've been working on.

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  • 617 weeks
    That's it...

    You know that feeling when you know you've done something wrong and you try to hide from the people you wronged to avoid facing them? Yeah well that's what happened with Lost Time. I really hate my ending. Like really really hate it. It wasn't up to my standards and I released it anyways hoping that you, the readers, would not notice how hastily I wrote it. I'm going to rewrite it, but not now. I

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  • 619 weeks
    First story complete!

    Thank you all for reading Lost Time! I had a blast writing it and even though there were some hard times, you guys made it all worth the effort. I know that some people had problems with my ending, and I expected nothing less because it is a very controversial ending.


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Jul
18th
2012

Chapter 13 + Epilogue · 2:06am Jul 18th, 2012

[Chapter 13] Best Laid Plans
https://docs.google.com/document/d/114PDml-g94mwjNicVPkpmwM19VsNebJ9qOOTsTsb9Sg/edit

[Epilogue] Dawn of a New Day
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tx1WwA-OnZ1ywGLeFSblPzjvsBlOaRe_JLl0jGhdUdY/edit

There you go. There are probably a bunch of mistakes in them as these are my pre-edit versions. Remember that this ending is very tenative. A huge majority of the events will be changed to better suit the mood and theme of the story.

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Comments ( 3 )

Yesss!!:rainbowkiss:

And no worries, I totally understand this is the ending you really don't like, so it doesn't reflect back on you--at least in my eyes. Thanks man; it probably wasn't easy for you to put these up, especially given how you feel about them, so I appreciate it--really. Can't wait to read them--right now is sleep time. :ajsleepy:

God damnitt, I'm at school and this won't load. Looks like I have to wait to the afternoon to read these edits. :twilightangry2:

So.... when you said hiatus.... how long of a hiatus did you mean 'cause.... it's been awhile... if you... aren't busy...:fluttershysad:

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