First story complete! · 4:33am Jun 23rd, 2012
Thank you all for reading Lost Time! I had a blast writing it and even though there were some hard times, you guys made it all worth the effort. I know that some people had problems with my ending, and I expected nothing less because it is a very controversial ending.
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Twilight cocked her head in confusion"Well then, Celestia. I understand how you and Luna became alicorns, but what about Cadance?" Twilight asked.
"What about her?" Celestia sneered, rolling her eyes as she pursed her lips.
"Well I mean, did you make her an alicorn or what?"
"No."
"No, what?" Twilight asked, kind of put off by the response.
"Nope."
"I don't understa-"
"Nope! I can do this all day."
"Okay..." Twilight conceded as she dropped her head pathetically.
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It's not like I have anything against Cadance. She's perfectly fine for a princess alicorn who's married to the Captain of the Royal Guard and has a unique power that controls love and was imprisoned by an evil being through no fault of her own and gave her power to her husband and helped saved the world. Also, shes very smart and pretty and has unique wings with purple tips and she fits in with all the mane 6 and she knew Twilight for a very long time. Yeah I've got nothing against her.
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I know Cadance kinda ruined my theory, but I have an updated version. Alicorns can happen naturally but very rarely. Their bodies, being a mix of all three races, are capable of amazing powers, but not all are capable of reaching that potential.
So again. Thank you all for reading my story, there will be more in the future.
And if you would all be so kind, give Lost Time a rating (good or bad), I'd like to reach at least 1000 ratings total, regardless of the results.
Oh and I'm not asking or anything, but it would be so cool if someone wanted to do a reading of the story. You know... if you want to or whatever.
Mary Sue? What Mary Sue? I don't know any Mary Sues! Especially ones that are pink alicorns and can control love and apparently were a very big part of the main character's life and who apparently never came up in conversation with the main character's closest friends in all the time they've known each other and...
...Yeah, that episode would have been so great if Cadence hadn't been so... "Sue-ish". She just made it feel like a bad fanfiction.
Yay! Now I have a hope of catching up! So busy reviewing on Ponychan that I'm still back on chapter 7. Congrats!
Hahahaha, Cadence doesn't fit your theory, but, honestly, I didn't even think about her during Lost Time. Maybe I'm odd, but I hardly give her any thought. I loved A Canterlot Wedding, but, to me, Cadence always ends up shoved to the back of my mind to be ignored, like she's irrelevant. To her own wedding. Yeah.
For the record, she wasn't even there most of the time.
I stand by my theory on Cadence..... She's not an alicorn. The wings were a recurring animation error. And I have nothing against her either, as a character. She's a nice unicorn with a nice power who had the misfortune of being drawn in a way that made her look like she had wings.
The only alicorns I accept in my world are Celestia, Luna and Nyx. (Nyx at least has a fully developed background and explanation of where she came from.)
"...dropped her head pathetically."?
Pathetically? Bad word choice there.