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LightningSword


Me. Take it or leave it.

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  • 40 weeks
    Just some thoughts

    Yeah. Been awhile, I know.

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    4 comments · 443 views
  • 196 weeks
    Why I Don't Write Here Anymore

    I suppose it's been on my mind for a long time, but it never really occurred to me until recently. And because a few of you have been waiting for some projects I promised I'd finished, you deserve to know, as well.

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  • 230 weeks
    This exists . . .

    This is a thing that exists. This was made with effort, and money.

    And Hasbro actually put their name on this.

    . . .

    . . .

    . . .

    I'm gonna step away from this one.

    9 comments · 787 views
  • 236 weeks
    My good friend needs some support

    You all probably know HudsonHawk, especially if you know me. Even though I've never met the man in person, he's my best friend on this site, on the internet, and probably ever.

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    0 comments · 588 views
  • 240 weeks
    Embarking on a new venture

    Recently I discovered a site for content creators called Daisie. It allows people to post their work and ask for collaborators, and it was created by actress Maisie Williams, whom many of you might know as Arya Stark from Game of Thrones.

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May
5th
2015

Blown away . . . · 3:42am May 5th, 2015

So, most of you know that I wrote this kinky little one-shot called "New Neighbor". You know, that second-person thing where you help out Rarity and get to make out with her in return? Thing is, I got that idea from a Facebook scenario a while back. This MLP group I'm in had a post on it, featuring the screenshot that became the cover pic for the fic, and in it, the scene was as follows:

you're walking on the sidewalk as you are about to head home. When you approach your door, you hear a "Yoo hoo!" and turn around to see Rarity with this look on her face (see pic). She says, "Would you please carry my groceries to my home, please?" (her home right across from yours) She then says, "If you do help me, how about we go out Friday night?"

Would you do it?

I just took the concept, added to it, tweaked it a bit, and this is what I came up with.

I never thought for a minute that it would get 74 likes, over 800 views, and become my third-highest-ranked story on the site.

Really, I'm shocked at that. I thought it would just sink into obscurity (especially after what I've done to Rarity in the past :fluttershysad:). But as it turns out, all I really need to do to maximize rating potential is to avoid putting my stories in certain groups (I'm still rather unfairly disliked by some).

But most of all, I have you, my readers and followers, to thank for this surprising turnout. With a few more views, it'll have a clean 1,000 and be my fourth story to do so, and with a few more likes, this could very well be my best fic to date ("One More Dance" has some strong competition!)

Thanks again, guys. If you haven't read it yet, give it a look. Have fun! :raritywink:

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Comments ( 2 )

you're walking on the sidewalk as you are about to head home. When you approach your door, you hear a "Yoo hoo!" and turn around to see Rarity with this look on her face (see pic). She says, "Would you please carry my groceries to my home, please?" (her home right across from yours) She then says, "If you do help me, how about we go out Friday night?"
Would you do it?

YES! YES! DEAR GOD, BUDDAH, ALLAH, WHATEVER FREAKING DEITY OF YOUR CHOICE, YES!

Mainly because it would be the only time in my life that someone's asked me out... but still...

Congratulations bro, it was a really well done story and I'm glad it's getting some recognition.

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