Thank you and a preview · 3:18pm Apr 30th, 2015
I just wanted to thank all of you for your wonderful feedback on that RL story of mine. It's helped me out sooo much! Thank you, thank you! I talked to my current creative writing teacher, and she says my writing's easily in the top tier that she's seen in classes. She seems to think I have a good shot at getting in, so here's hoping.
As a thank you, I thought you might like to see what I've been cooking up for TCARW's and AHL's sequels. Here's a general description/blurb about each. Because you deserve to know. ^^
If you don't want to know, I suggest you stop here Have a cute donkey instead.
For those of you who want to know, read on!
I'm soooo excited for these two! They're for TCARW . . .
Book Two -Lesson One: Twilight's ecstatic to finally be learning chaos magic, but, even she has to admit it's been an awkward few weeks. Having unintentionally dated the Lord of Chaos has had some interesting ramifications. With the townsponies, her friends, and her overbearing brother constantly making assumptions, it's becoming nearly impossible to have a normal friendship with the draconequus. Then there's her role as princess. Discord seems convinced that it lies with balance, but how? It'll take more than a little time to figure that one out.
Living in Ponyville had been tolerable as a pony, but as a draconequus, he was a far from welcome visitor. Try as he may to "turn back the clock" on his relationship with Twilight, he can't stop being attracted to her. However, he would keep his word, and remain a loyal friend. After all, there was still plenty to do as friends. For one, chaos lessons. It was more than a little amusing to watch Miss Harmony herself come up with "chaotic" ideas. Discord could have told her that mismatched socks and unfolded clothing hardly constituted chaos. He'd have to work on that . . .
Upon a most unusual request from Discord, Celestia struggles to find a position of authority for him that doesn't threaten the sanity of her subjects. When a particularly heart wrenching case is brought to her attention, she discovers that Discord's talents lie in more than mere jests. But, will her subjects agree to give him a try? There's only one way to find out . . .
Book Three- Regarding Draconequus (Adventure story, yeah, you heard me, I'm writing an adventure story): A mysterious disease has struck the Griffon Empire, and their delegates have come to Equestria for assistance. Celestia feels this is a matter of utmost importance and urges Twilight and Discord to fulfill their new roles and go to the Empire's aid. Though Twilight is eager to get started, Discord protests, proclaiming the country's suffering as a "curse for their transgressions" and refuses to raise so much as a claw in their defense. After a very heated argument, Twilight manages to convince Discord to come along (though he insists on remaining in his Entropy form).
After arriving, Twilight soon discovers more lies and trickery than she could have ever thought possible. With each new cover-up brought to life, Twilight wonders if Discord 's earlier proclamation wasn't closest to the truth. When the gilding is stripped away from this desert oasis, all that remains is an ocean of blood.
AHL's is still a little vague, but here's what I have so far . . .
Flim and Flam have been making it work. They've finally settled into their roles as traveling inventor/repair man and accountant respectively. They've even managed to pay a good portion of the debt. Despite that, Flim grows increasingly restless, longing to return to Sweet Apple Acres. Flam hates that his brother had to give up everything to come rescue him and vows to make it up to his twin in good time.
After Flim receives word from Seance about a "premonition," they head off to Sweet Apple Acres. There they find not only a struggling farm, but also a broken family. Can Flim put the broken pieces together again?
I'm not sure as much on AHL's sequel, but I'll write it up around the time I write Book Two for TCARW.
I've got BIG plans, guys and gals, so don't think I'm quitting just yet!
O gosh mujst have AHL sequel!
that donkey is so cute I cant wait for the coming sequels! the excitement is killing me!
Nice ideas for the sequels. I'll be willing to help with ideas for both of these stories. Great job and good luck. I am curious about what Discord's new responsibilities will be? I guess we will see.
3031102 Awesome! I just had a few genius moments on campus for Book 3. Teee heee. It's gonna be good!
Sounds awesome.
*SQUEE!*
Donkey!