ATTENTION ALL ENTITIES! WRONG DOINGS SUGGESTION PANEL! · 4:37pm Apr 20th, 2015
Now if you are not one of my followers who have been reading my story, My Little Witch, then please catch up on our story ! You are likely aware of the new plot point of dangerous people beyond the rift that may present a problem to Scry in the future, now I can obviously deal out a few likely influences they have in the world that seek to harm her.
However, anybody, pony, entity and so on that want to suggest something to happen then I'll look into it, this is a blog in honor of people who want to play the bad guy and disrupt the life of Scry Fortune, as always I ask you not to do something TOO insane, like, break out Discord early, or have Sombra see Scry's cottage as an oversize crystal, whatever you want, speak about it here!
I'm also not above double agents, I mean, it's the reason why I didn't include your Fimfiction names and only the ones you gave on your comments, play the field as both and see how the story unfolds!
This is Poison Joker, and I invite all do-baders, crafty villains, spiteful tyrants and malicious evils to plot and scheme to their hearts content!#
THIS MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS FOR THE UPCOMING STORY!
Ohhhhh yes, this will be glorious.
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Hopefully, wonder what the last comment said... ah well, guess I'll leave this little one open until someone gets to it.
(Well since no one wants to step forward yet I will create the first our first opposition to out dear friend Scry)
It started like all the other. A small beam of light appeared in the darkness of the void signalling the entrance to another world, probably created by some foolish mortal trying something they should have left well enough alone. Not that it cared; all this meant was that another world was ready for its embrace. With a simple thought it tore a bit of itself of and launch it at the light the small bit of darkness flew across the dived and slammed into a barrier. With a puzzled thought the entity brought it conscious to bear on the barrier and felt a familiar energy. “The Voidwalker” the entity hissed annoyed with this being interrupting his work yet again. No matter it could work around him he was strong yes, but tended to focus too much on blocking only one entrance at a time. With a simple thought the entity sent the smaller section of itself to gently probe the barrier until he found a gap it its defences and quietly slipped though and began it search.
It found what it was looking for from a group of creature arguing in the dark. These were creature that shunned the light and would do anything for it to be banished forever just like their goddess had wanted to do so long ago. The entity changed it form and approached the group as their goddess praising them for their loyalty and offered them a reward. The fools gladly accepted, the entity entered them filling them with new strength while it corrupted their minds. It told them many things but most importantly it told them how they could get revenge for their goddess all they needed to do was find the source of the light that drew him and capture it and preform the ritual to widen the hole so that their new master The Dark One could enter this world and claim it for its own.
(So long story short the new entity is called The Dark One and it has taken control of a group of NightMare Moon worshipers/assassins to foalnap Scry so that it can use her as a gateway into this new realm and claim it as its own. The Dark One is a primal of darkness that went insane and consumed his world in darkness and is constantly trying to expand itself.)
Well hope you like the idea
your sincerely Potdl
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Nice~ See guys? This is what I'm talking about!
Moon worshipers has been done here and there, fimfiction is like that, but it sure will become a nice chapter later. I think each entity that corrupts should have a distinctive look about them, you know?
Now the question is where to slot in their arrival... oh, hold on, I should probably add something like 'THIS MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS!' so that nopony knows what might come up next unless they want to.
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Hey Poison
For this entity (The Dark One) the signs of corruption will be that their eyes will be completely black and ooze out darkness but only when it is night or when the possessed creature is in the dark E.g in a cave or building sealed of from natural sunlight. If they walk about during the day they will wear heavy dark colored cloaks, also the darker the surrounding area it is the stronger the possessed will be both physically and magically.
Also note that the possessed still currently have some personality as the Dark Ones Influence is still only light but it will grow with time. Lastly they should attack in the next couple of nights as the Dark One is arrogant and does not believe that the one who opened the portal to the void or multi-verse is very smart or capable. But it will find out the truth shortly.
Heh...Things gonna get weird....What's with many different entities (fimfic readers) fighting over the life and well being of Scry Fortune and the world...openly in the comment or privately....the war between beings with near god-like power....or close enough. Haven't seen this sort of story before...let's begin!
As I was 'cleaning up' the Void horrors that came in large quantities and listened to the music in Stealth. I felt a disturbance in the Force...Checking back to the barrier..."Nothing seem unusual." Returning to my duty and personal bussiness...No sooner has I done that, the feelings of dread came. I look back..."No!" I brought to bear my power and unleash. It seem to did its job...But, the 'corruption' has slipped passed...And I failed to see it in time..."Damn it!" I cannot do anything much with such corruption...It has slip passsed my guard and managed to infect the world...I cannot use my power at its full potential unless I care not for the fate of the universe itself.
"So...Here we go again..."
"The Dark One comes. The Dark Ones became. Armies had been shattered, worlds had been burnt. It begins all over again. I had lost and victored over The Dark One. I don't want to make this another failure. Scry Fortune. I hope you can overcome the darkness to come...With our help, I hope...for the stories must continue. The cycles must completed. The world must last as long as it has been made for. Scry Fortune...You are now this world's hope. For no other have been touched by the Void as you have. For no other has gotten a glimpse of the Beyond like you have."
"Come, my loyal soldiers! Come to me...For 'Winter' is coming!"
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Tried my best...
Well Since no one else is posting any villains I guest I post my second one.
Epidemius was in a hurry, as he always was, his master always had a demand for new and improved plagues. As the Tallyman of the Great Grandfather Nurgle it was his sworn duty to catalog all new diseases and pests and watch how they performed as well as be on the lookout for new ingredients to add to the great plague cauldron.
His current order from his master were to deliver one of Nurgle latest creations to a new world that recently opened it self to the warp. As he rode his rotting palanquin thru the warp he could see a shield surrounding his target with a wave of his bloated hand an almost unending stream or Nurglings poured out from underneath his palanquin silently racing toward the shield before exploding in great gout of pus and rotting flesh. The shield soon appeared to have blisters upon it surface and stared to glow with a sickly yellow light. When Epidemius approached the barrier he did not slow down and instead rammed the shield which collapsed in on itself like a rotten fruit. Epidemius knew he had little time before whatever created the barrier would arrived so with a quick scan of the world below he found a location away from any civilization and sent four Nurglings to the surface carrying a large cauldron. With his mission complete Epidemius once again surged into the depths of the warp to wherever his master demanded. He would return to this world in time and catalog the results of the plague he had sent to the helpless world below
ON THE PLANET BELOW
In the Hayseed Swamps in the south east of Equestria a tear in the fabric of reality opened and out came four creatures that looked to be made out of snot and pus carrying a giant cauldron with obvious glee the creature set the cauldron down and proceeded to have bathe in the greenish liquid inside it. As they splashed about the liquid in the cauldron churned and bubbled and when some of it inevitably landed on the soil below the soil and plants began to wither and rot. Slowly the sickness started spreading outward from the cauldron infect all in its wake. It would take some time but this world was about to receives it first gift from Grandfather Nurgle whether it wanted to or not.
Well hope you like it I have also listed some links below as reference to this entity as it is from the Warhammer World
http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Epidemius
http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Nurgle
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Interesting, VERY interesting...
I'll be sure to fit them in at a later date, also,
ATTENTION NEEDED Since adding in villains is pretty awesome, I'll ask that a minimum of three minor entities and max of five should be in every canon season for this story, to fill in those blanks, but also to not get it clogged up so much.
I reserve the right to make one myself as well... but I will wait till a later date as to SURPRISE people. So consider the slot a capacity count.
Antagonist Entities of Season 1: 3/5
Including the one I'll be adding soon, unless the ones suggested are REALLY too good to pass up.