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SoaringCoal


Just a guy on the internet wanting to write stories

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  • 386 weeks
    Illidan story First chapter preview

    Water dripped from the cave’s ceiling, spilling down onto the dark mossy floor and a figure stirred in the blackness. The cave was long, deep and without light, the drops echoing through its walls as if it would go on forever. Shriveled pieces of paper laid across the stone floor, others flat and some whole. There was a simple wooden desk put against the wall with a pen and a book lying beside

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  • 391 weeks
    Story Nr. 7 preview (Possessed Shining Armor story)

    Hello there. Here's a preview at the first chapter of story number 7. As I've mentioned before it takes place in the future. Keep in mind that this is unedited, and unpolished. It should give a general idea of the story, or at least a little of it.


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  • 391 weeks
    Preview of story Nr. 2 (Adventures of Captain Goodguy)

    Here's a preview of the prologue of the Captain GoodGuy story. Let me know what you think of it.


    Hmmm… How do I start this?

    I could start with telling about my many adventures?

    No that’s not good…

    Maybe from the beginning?

    Nah, too cliche.

    I guess I will start with my name.

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  • 393 weeks
    Story Nr. 5 preview (see last post)

    Okay so here's a small part of a chapter from story nr 7, I've chosen to call: A Fine Line. Keep in mind that this is a very small piece of a very long story. The story will be segments like these and also about Twilight discovering other alternative universes.

    The bit below is unedited, and unpolished.


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  • 395 weeks
    Choices to make. Halp

    Alrighty, as the title implies, I have a choice to make. I have about 7 different stories I want to write, while DiE is still going strong for, as it turns out, I've gotten some more time on my hands. For the next week, I'll be trying to find out which of the stories to write. And I would like you guys help choosing which one.

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Apr
18th
2015

Wow first blog post. Never thought I would get to make one of these thingies. Also Thank You All · 3:54pm Apr 18th, 2015

Hi.

I just want to say that I don't know when the next chapter of Deathwing in Equestria will be finished as im also working on creating another story. A much darker and tragic one starring our favorite lord of chaos, the celestial princesses and the main six. It probably won't be published until after DWIE(Deathwing In Equestria) is finished(which it is far from). Plus, im also kinda torn on how to write the main six. I simply can't get into the mindset of Rarity and Flippin Pinkie Pie. It is frustrating to say the least and it's also the explanation as to why the Rarity chapter(Touched by harmony) took so long to finish. Damn fashionista. It really adds alot of extra time I have to spend on the chapter and in this case it added between 7-10 days(I kid you not).

I will try to have the next chapter out soon. Probably by the twenty-fifth or something. Im not quite sure. If sooner then great. Completely depends on next weeks, ugh, appointments.

Other than that I want to thank Everyone who have taken their time to press that Follow, favourite and like button. I never thought DWIE would get as far as it has gotten for the first story I have (EVER) published. I appreciate the support, your comments, that you have taken your time to read my fiction and I want thank all of you in general for being the nice people that you are. :twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 3 )

one thing i learned about writing difficult characters is that it is much easier if you put yourself into a general mind set for that character. For Rarity try to have a upper class mind set someone who is yous to wealth and has a hard time understanding practicality
For Pinkie just writ happy and be a little scatterbrained.
This helps me a lot with understanding their characters let me know if it helps you

Thanks for the tips. I will try following them and update you on the results.:twilightsmile:

im glad to be your follower but i agree with the above statement
make rarity care about image as more important in opportune times but she needs to still be overly generous while not coming off as condescending

pinkie shouldn't just be scatter brained and needs to think and act fast, make her spontaneous but caring, when she should be the first one to offer a cupcake to cheer up friends

don't take what i said completely to heart though

ive never published anything but ive read an awful bunch so ive seen the good, the bad, and the OOC so best of luck and great story so far

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