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The King of Hearts


Plain and simple Brony. (Loves Ding Dongs. (The chocolate kind(Not the weiner kind (Unless I'm in a good mood.))))

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  • 235 weeks
    Production is Moving in to Full Swing

    Hey everyone!

    Well, it's been a long ass time. And I'm not even sure how many of you guys are still out there waiting to read it. But, I'm finally at the point that I can start powering through writing the finale, as I've finally finished with school, and have a few quiet months ahead of me.

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  • 339 weeks
    I FINALLY Found the Right Words to End the Story With!

    After weeks and days and hours of thinking, I've finally come up with the beautiful words to end my story!

    Behold!

    “Yeah, I’d better enjoy you now, because I know what’ll happen once we get married.” Alex said, as he kissed the top of her head, and taking a moment to smell the shampoo in her hair.

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    9 comments · 1,096 views
  • 340 weeks
    About the Final Chapter...

    Now, I'm not sure how many of you are STILL around after this horrendously long journey, (I'm gonna say 5%).

    But I'd like to apologize for taking so long to get this stuff out, particularly the final chapter.

    My big problem right now, is that I literally can't find the words to end this story.

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    20 comments · 823 views
  • 436 weeks
    Posted for Moderation

    Well, this is it. The story is pending approval by a mod.

    I hope you like it, it took me long enough to get it done!

    The last five months have kinda frazzled my brain though, so if the story ends up terrible, well...Eh.

    I'm just happy to be movin' on!

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  • 441 weeks
    Just a Little Update for Y'all

    Hey, just wanted to tell you all I've more or less finished the next chapter, I just need to edit it now, and have it proofread! The only problem I really face now, is that I need to work my way through the 4 months it took me to write this, and figure out what plot holes I've made myself, and fix them all up!

    So yeah! Sorry it took so long guys.

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Mar
12th
2015

Going to be doing some editing · 5:32am Mar 12th, 2015

Just letting everyone know that updates might stall out for a week or so, while I reread some of this beast and fix errors that have been around for... well, 3 years! I'll probably put a lot of effort in to the beginning, as it's the face of the story, and more readers are always good!

So yeah! I'll probably do it in chunks, because I don't have all that much time to read, and i would just end up holding this up for a month.

So this is just a heads up.

Love ya'


-Scooter
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Comments ( 12 )

Don't take this the wrong way, but I notice a few things within your current writing that needs to be corrected. What you need is someone else to edit your story. Someone who is a bit better at this grammar stuff. If you'd like, I could be the one to do it. I assume you write in GDocs or MWord, so it shouldn't be too hard for me to edit. Anyway, hit me up with a PM if you're interested.
--Stahl

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Oh, I'm aware of the problems within the current stuff. I've always just been a huge procrastinator when to going back and fixing my work, and really, when it comes to improving my overall writing style. I'm just bad all over.

However, as for editors, I've tried in the past to go that route, but always end up far too impatient in waiting for others to pass me back my work to post it. So I've kinda given up on that for the most part. But! When it comes to my side-stories, I'm much happier to pass around a rough draft and get some feedback, along with corrections (if they're happy to do it.) So, in regards to those future chapters, I'll hit you up 100% if you're interested.

2869290 Sweet! I'd be happy to edit for you! Now would it just be the side stories, or does this include all future chapters?

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*Mostly* side stories. Like i said, I'm an impatient Peter in a lot of ways, especially for just little updates. But if there are some other important chapters in the main story that I feel i need opinions or help on, I'll toss them your way. But, all side stories if you're happy to do it.

2869305 Whenever a big chapter and/or side story pops up, PM me. I do have a quick question though: what do you use to write?

2869317 Woo! Just what I like best! I will admit that editing Pink Eyes did make me have a somehow deeper connection with GDocs.

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Word is just what I've always used.

I don't like change. I throw crying fits when people try to force change upon me.

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good thing the universe doesn't toss you in other places like this one...this story.

Reboot, corrections... you really have your work cut out for you, don't you? :rainbowlaugh:

2869336 I was just mentioning how I grew accustomed to GDocs. MWord is best writing program anyway!

You mean im gunna have to... WAIT for the next chapter?!
Oh my! Where's my fainting couch?

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