Could really use an editor

Greetings, my fellow cartoon horse enthusiasts!

I just finished writing the first chapter of a two shot story starring everybrony's waifu: Twilight Sparkle. In it, a young Twilight's curiousity gets the better of her. Needless to say, Celestia is not pleased.

I really want to post it, but I can't. It's not perfect yet. So, I need someone or something to go to the Googledocs file, take a look at my fic, and tell me what I need to do to make it perfect.

If you're interested, here's a link: Link sausage

Thank you!

Comments

[Word Worthy]

I could take a look at it in about an hour, if you like.

[VampDash]

Done. You're welcome. Minor edits here and there.

[Luna_gamer]

took a look through, and added some punctuation where needed and added a few comments on it where things seem to be missing. Hope it helps, Also if you need help editing in the future don't hesitate to ask.

[Fort Impression]

Twilight isn't my waifu. I have Pinkie Pie.