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canisloopis


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  • 480 weeks
    Starting up again

    I forgot how easy and hard this writing thing is. Coming up with content is pretty easy for me. Typing it out is pretty easy for me. The hard part is editing it satisfactorily and potentially maintaining continuity. I could really use someone to bounce Ideas off of. I posted a chapter earlier today and already have another 2100 words written in the next chapter.

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  • 499 weeks
    [no title]

    I'm very excited. My stories are now both in the positive as far as upvotes vs. downvotes. In forced Derek finally starts his transformation to pony, will it go smoothly? Probably not, that wouldn't be a very interesting story :) I'm very excited about the things that are about to start happening in Forced Perspective.

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  • 503 weeks
    Chapter 6 of Forced Perspective

    I'm very excited one of my stories finally broke even on upvotes vs downvotes. I'm working on chapter 6 of Forced Perspective at the moment and will try to have it out by the end of the weekend depending on my editor's availability. I really want to reveal Derek's new name but the story must progress further before it makes sense for him to give up Derek. I'm very excited about this new chapter,

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  • 504 weeks
    looking for feedback

    Right now I have two stories that kind of budded from the same idea. I wrote story 1 (changing perspective) and rushed to the clop. I got a lot of feedback saying that the grammar was terrible (which it was, I intend to fix it at some point but right now I think adding new content is more important than fixing up the old stuff) and a few saying that I hadn't developed my main character.

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  • 511 weeks
    Here goes chapter one of my new story

    Lets see if this one ends up any better than the last one. I'm pretty disappointed with my first attempt. So i listened to all of the criticism and made a second attempt. Wish me luck!

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Feb
18th
2015

Starting up again · 11:14pm Feb 18th, 2015

I forgot how easy and hard this writing thing is. Coming up with content is pretty easy for me. Typing it out is pretty easy for me. The hard part is editing it satisfactorily and potentially maintaining continuity. I could really use someone to bounce Ideas off of. I posted a chapter earlier today and already have another 2100 words written in the next chapter.

The main delay for publishing chapters comes from my inability to edit my own work. I know what I'm trying to convey and have such a vivid image of what's going on in my head that I'm not sure if I'm actually painting an accurate picture until I can totally forget that image and see if my words paint a decent one. That takes a long time. So what I have to do is write the chapter and make the obvious edits I can. The I leave the chapter for a month or two, that way when I come back to it, I can look at it with fresh eyes.

If I had someone that could assist with the editing process, not even worry about grammar or proper punctuation as much as making sure I'm typing "they went to the story" instead of "they went went the store" that would be very helpful.

If you like my story and would like it to come out more often please send me a message and I'll send you a link to the next chapter. Even if you just a have a minute now and again, even if you aren't that good with grammar or spelling, the more eyes the better.

Plus as an added perk, you get to read the stories a bit ahead of time.

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