MForced Perspective
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
HiE, gender bending, ponification. Derek chases Rainbow Dash through a portal. Twilight is nervous she is going to get in trouble, so tries to disguise him. The spell doesn't go as planned, and Derek wakes up a girl.
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Starting up again

I forgot how easy and hard this writing thing is. Coming up with content is pretty easy for me. Typing it out is pretty easy for me. The hard part is editing it satisfactorily and potentially maintaining continuity. I could really use someone to bounce Ideas off of. I posted a chapter earlier today and already have another 2100 words written in the next chapter.
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I'm very excited. My stories are now both in the positive as far as upvotes vs. downvotes. In forced Derek finally starts his transformation to pony, will it go smoothly? Probably not, that wouldn't be a very interesting story :) I'm very excited about the things that are about to start happening in Forced Perspective.
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Chapter 6 of Forced Perspective

I'm very excited one of my stories finally broke even on upvotes vs downvotes. I'm working on chapter 6 of Forced Perspective at the moment and will try to have it out by the end of the weekend depending on my editor's availability. I really want to reveal Derek's new name but the story must progress further before it makes sense for him to give up Derek. I'm very excited about this new chapter,
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504 weeks
looking for feedback

Right now I have two stories that kind of budded from the same idea. I wrote story 1 (changing perspective) and rushed to the clop. I got a lot of feedback saying that the grammar was terrible (which it was, I intend to fix it at some point but right now I think adding new content is more important than fixing up the old stuff) and a few saying that I hadn't developed my main character.
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511 weeks
Here goes chapter one of my new story

Lets see if this one ends up any better than the last one. I'm pretty disappointed with my first attempt. So i listened to all of the criticism and made a second attempt. Wish me luck!
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Here goes chapter one of my new story · 12:29am Jul 16th, 2014

Lets see if this one ends up any better than the last one. I'm pretty disappointed with my first attempt. So i listened to all of the criticism and made a second attempt. Wish me luck!

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