I forgot how easy and hard this writing thing is. Coming up with content is pretty easy for me. Typing it out is pretty easy for me. The hard part is editing it satisfactorily and potentially maintaining continuity. I could really use someone to bounce Ideas off of. I posted a chapter earlier today and already have another 2100 words written in the next chapter.

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I'm very excited. My stories are now both in the positive as far as upvotes vs. downvotes. In forced Derek finally starts his transformation to pony, will it go smoothly? Probably not, that wouldn't be a very interesting story :) I'm very excited about the things that are about to start happening in Forced Perspective.

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I'm very excited one of my stories finally broke even on upvotes vs downvotes. I'm working on chapter 6 of Forced Perspective at the moment and will try to have it out by the end of the weekend depending on my editor's availability. I really want to reveal Derek's new name but the story must progress further before it makes sense for him to give up Derek. I'm very excited about this new chapter, this is where things really start to get to the meat of the story. So far everything has kind of

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Right now I have two stories that kind of budded from the same idea. I wrote story 1 (changing perspective) and rushed to the clop. I got a lot of feedback saying that the grammar was terrible (which it was, I intend to fix it at some point but right now I think adding new content is more important than fixing up the old stuff) and a few saying that I hadn't developed my main character.

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Lets see if this one ends up any better than the last one. I'm pretty disappointed with my first attempt. So i listened to all of the criticism and made a second attempt. Wish me luck!

Lets see if this one ends up any better than the last one. I'm pretty disappointed with my first attempt. So i listened to all of the criticism and made a second attempt. Wish me luck!

I have so many ideas that i think could make good stories. The problem is that a lot of them are mutually exclusive. I'm thinking the best way to handle it would be writing one story, ending it. then doing like the end of Clue "that's how it could've went, but how about this" seeing which gets better feedback, then go from there.

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I'm baffled. I have a story i want to tell, but i'm running into brick walls with my ability to tell it. It's quite frustrating. Maybe i should write the whole thing out, then worry about editing later?

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I really want to write a nightmare night bit where tank shows up dressed as a yellow striped bat.

I recently posted my first story. It was my first serious attempt and putting my thoughts out there. It was met with...mixed results... I discovered that while my idea was solid and I liked some of the scenes, my characters were massively underdeveloped. They were just names that things happened to, as opposed to personalities and a collection of learned experiences. With some great tips from Bobdat I'm going to give the story a whole new beginning from the ground up.

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