Apology · 12:56am Jan 20th, 2015
Nobody I've sent the story to has contacted me back with edits. I'm really sorry for those who were put off with the sloppy excution of this chapter. If anyone is available, please respond, and I'll send you the story.
Well, that sucks that your usual proofreaders haven't gotten back to you yet. That said, I hope that what I sent you via PM helped.
2734831 If worst comes to worst I'll make the corrections myself using what you gave me.