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LightOfTriumph


Good authors too, who once knew better words, Now only use four-letter words writing prose. Anything goes. :raritywink:

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    Act 1 is done.

    Act 2 might take a couple of weeks, but for now, new Chapter.

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Jan
7th
2015

Third of the Shattered Six! Fluttershy vs. Shudder! · 6:18am Jan 7th, 2015

So I'll try to get the next chapter of AKG out tomorrow, but I may have to delay it a day. It will come out no later then Thursday, Pinkie Promise.

I even plugged in a couple of hundred words! Without further ado, here they are! Preview thingy!:yay:

Fluttershy woke up in a cage.

It wasn't your traditional kind of cage. It seemed like more of a long barred hallway with a dirt floor. Outside of the bars appeared to be a large room with thousands of bright stadium lights. Shy was nervous. She didn't like cages, and she hated the spotlight.

She was on the verge of panic when she heard a small squeak coming from her hooves. Excitable as she was, the noise startled her. She looked down and saw a small mouse looking back up at her with curiosity.

"Oh," Fluttershy smiled. "Hello Mr. Mousey! How are you?" She knelt down to get a closer look at the creature. Closer examination revealed that the mouse was obviously quite ill. It's fur had begun to gray prematurely. It's ribs were showing. "Oh my goodness!" Fluttershy gasped. "It looks like no one's fed you in days! No one has been keeping you warm, and you definitely need more cheese! Well we'll just take you back to my cottage-"

The mouse turned and ran down the caged hallway.

"Wait!" Fluttershy yelled out. "You shouldn't be going anywhere in your condition!"

Fluttershy chased the mouse down the hallway into the darkness. Her visibility was limited to the floor of the cage, which seemed to become wider. Her eyes fixated on the mouse...

Until a cream yellow hoof came down hard on the pitiful creature, snapping it's spine and killing it instantly.

Fluttershy's jaw was on the floor.

The lights came up revealing that the hallway had led to a large circular cage. Every single wall had compartments in it. Each compartment contained an animal. Obviously alone. Obviously hungry. Obviously suffering.

In the middle of the cage, grinding her hoof into the dead mouse, was a mare. She was cream yellow, and had a light pink mane that she hat put into a tight braid. She wore a black spiked bracelet on each hoof and she had a collar to match. The expression on her face was a sickening smug pride.

"If he's told me once, he's told me a thousand times," the mare said with a mixture of mocking exasperation and abject glee. "Show no mercy to creatures of darkness.

*looks at physical description if Shudder*

:rainbowderp:.... Okay... So it has just occurred to me that I may have created evil dominatrix Fluttershy (Flutterdom?)... That was NOT intentional... That's just how things turned out.

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