21 and a new story · 6:48pm Dec 20th, 2014
Hey guys. Just letting you know that today's my birthday. I've turned 21, and today, I've also put up a new story. It's a Bionicle/MLP crossover called Tales of Virtues and Harmony. Here's the summary:
"Gather friends. Listen to the legend of the Bionicle.
In the time before time, the world was a different place. Where biomechanical beings lived, and where three virtues of Unity, Duty, and Destiny brought a civilization together. It was a place beyond imagination and legend as the noble Toa protected their people with the elemental powers.
Now, that era is over. It is the time of ponies and magic as Harmony spreads across the land of Equestria. The princesses celebrate a new addition to their ranks and seek to heal their land from the terror of Tirek.
But the past often catches up with the present. The light spring from the cracks and the shadows follow as remnants often come across the paths of these peaceful creatures. Peaceful creatures who face the legends that once roamed their world..."
I hope you like and please let me know what your thoughts are. Thanks!
-W.S.
Happy birthday! I haven't heard from you recently but we should change that moving forward.
That is quite an epic summary. The imagery makes it seem prophetic, or like a long lost tale that has become more myth than legend. Definitely worth the pursuit and effort if that is a simple summary.
2667258 Thanks! The summary I used is based from the style used within much of the Bionicle franchise. Here an opening from one of the Bionicle movies (Just watch up to 2:05):
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By the way, did you get to read the story and if yes, what did you think about it?
-W.S.
It definitely has promise but id recommend a prereader going forward. Mine has saved my butt a number of times and its totally worth it.
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