Pacing · 11:04pm Dec 10th, 2014
I decided to, with some hesitation, reread my story. No, not the entire thing, just Equestria Uprising. After reading the first chapter, I was already bored. The beginning of the second chapter was rushed, and felt off. I was kind of disappointed with myself.
Pacing is important. More so than I thought. It's clear to me now, that I still haven't gotten the right pacing with this story. Also, it is really important to have an equal amount of descriptive and active text. As well as action and dialogue.
I figured I'd share this with you, as I start the next chapter. I'll try even harder now to improve my writing. I guess we'll see how it goes.
Thanks for reading,
BattleMaestro