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unspokenpaper


Hey gang, im Paper. Im 23, junior at a military college, and a military brony. I've served in the Army in some facet since 2009. Im a fresh writer, so comment up the story brohammer!

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  • 444 weeks
    Life's great.

    Wow. This has been a dreadful semester.

    Motivation for all my writing died.
    My guard unit hasn't been to great.
    My school is getting increasingly more depressing in their treatment of seniors who got in the briefest of trouble.
    All my friends got kicked out of school for things that at normal colleges wouldn't even have been looked at.
    My grandfather had a stroke.

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  • 454 weeks
    Donezo

    After an evening with the sailor formerly known as Jerry, I'm deciding to go on indefinate hiatus. I don't think this writing thing is for my guise. I hope you've enjoyed all two chapters of FoE:ToaD. I did enjoy writing it, but I simply don't have the time I did a year ago.

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  • 456 weeks
    New direction.

    So I've been awol for a good bit with my story, Tales of a Dashite. I've been at Fort Knox for the better part of a month, and prior to that I was rolling deep in Fort Stewart, and had an asston and a half of school work to do.

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  • 471 weeks
    so I guess I am pretty bad at this writing stuff..

    So this writing stuff is a hell of a lot harder than I originally though. Words are tough.

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  • 475 weeks
    Restructuring

    Decided to enact a bit of rewriting to the story. It has been moved to hiatus status, and all of the chapters have been unpublished. EVERYTHING is being redone. The same basic story will be relatively untouched. However, expect some changes, even if you are a fan I recommend you go back and re read it. Right now, there have been over 4000 words added to the first chapter alone. Expect the first

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Oct
17th
2014

The struggle is so real. · 12:42pm Oct 17th, 2014

Well. Writing seems to be a lot harder than I thought. Don't get me wrong, I knew it would be a challenge. I just didn't envision how much life would get in the way. Coupled with the struggles of daily life and boy, do you get a problem! I've got such mad respect for people who can continuously pump out work week after week. That being said, I probably will not be posting many chapters in the near future. I'm absolutely slammed with school, national guard, and extracurricular stuff that isn't exactly optional for me. (Huzzah to military schools, ameyerite???)

So, the story hasn't exactly taken off as much as I'd like to have seen it. That could be because it really does stink. Or, it could just be the Fallout fandom. One individual said writing for this fandom was *Ahem* "Playing on Very Hard mode". I hought the comparison was quite applicable.
Anyhow, I'm doing my best over here. Im just asking for some crtiques to improve the writing. I'm asking for some love and toleration here. And a little bit of faith. Help me make this story great! Verbally abuse my story until it develops an eating disability. (Or like it, and follow, that's always nice to! Better than anorexia!)

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Yup, writing can be really hard, also I've gotten quite a few dislikes for my story literally just being a FoE story, not for the content. No-one is going to blame you for not pumping gout chapters like some sort of literary machine, sometimes you just don't have time, Plus, hiatus isn't really that bad.

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