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Hello fellow ponies, welcome to my corner of fimfiction. My names Frostfire and i write action & adventure stories with a bit of romance in them sometimes. hope you enjoy them and blessings from Luna.

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  • 377 weeks
    Sudden Absence, (Explained)

    To all my followers and fellow readers, I'm sorry for the sudden and long leave of absence. I had originally planned to have the next chapters to both my stories, A Wish That Could Be and SpikesXLuna the Sequel completed in September of last year but i made

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  • 433 weeks
    Legends of Equestria

    The server closed down so i thought I would write a little summary on my experience of the game. First and foremost I would like to give props to the team of people that not only maintain the website but make time to animate and create a cool game for us to all play. My experience with game was fun as I liked the ability to pick anyone of the three races to play as. Each pony race has a special

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  • 436 weeks
    Thank you

    I would like to formally thank everyone who has read my stories since the start of me writing on this site.I have been slow with my chapters but i try my best to create good content and your all so patient. Your all awesome, i cant tell you how much fun it is to write stories that you have all given a chance and read. i look back years ago on when i first became a Brony and am glad that it

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  • 473 weeks
    Great news

    First and foremost, let me apologize to my readers for my lack of updating. I'm sorry for not updating my stories in quite a while, life has been pretty busy lately. My absence was not for anything mundane however. I have been testing for my drivers license as well as trying to find a job. All the while, planning my brothers bachelor party because big news everypony, My Brother is getting

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  • 499 weeks
    Fall of Equestria Overview/rant my personal opinion and thoughts based on what i read

    So I go to the Everfree Festival and I meet a bunch of other ponies and make a bunch of new friends. One of them ends up telling me about this story called Fall of Equestria and introduces me to one of the many writers of it. We get to talking and he tells me all about the story and the world it takes place in. I at first was hesitant because I don't like reading stories that completely destroy

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2014

Fall of Equestria Overview/rant my personal opinion and thoughts based on what i read · 7:02am Oct 14th, 2014

So I go to the Everfree Festival and I meet a bunch of other ponies and make a bunch of new friends. One of them ends up telling me about this story called Fall of Equestria and introduces me to one of the many writers of it. We get to talking and he tells me all about the story and the world it takes place in. I at first was hesitant because I don't like reading stories that completely destroy the beautiful world of my little pony. after some time I he convinces me to read it. these are my thoughts.

first, the fact that it is not even on fimfiction. the group itself has a page on Fimfiction but no stories in the folders. I'm sorry but if the story is not on Fimfiction I usually don't go outside the site to search for it. with this story I made an exception because I really wanted to see if it was good.

Second, the bio was the next thing and it almost made me not want to read it.
an dark alternative universe where the old Equestrian order has been replaced by invading, patriarchal caribou. Using a combination of brutality and brainwashing techniques, they have converted the Equestrian males to their own twisted sense of morality, while all but a handful of well-hidden females have been enslaved.
now that's not the full bio but its the general gist of it. A big deterrent for me was that a bunch of caribou came in and turned all the female ponies into sex slaves. the way they did it is just a bit unpractical. they take the crystal heart and use it to turn most of the stallions into sex starved idiots. the crystal heart can only be used with intentions that are pure. it can not be used for evil, which king Sombra proved since he was destroyed by it.

thirdly, is the idea that a bunch of non magical cousins of the moose took down a bunch of magically adept ponies. I know they had armor that was impervious to magic because of enchantments but the armor is still steel. arrows if shot with enough power can pierce even the strongest of steel armor. not only that but throughout the war they just marched into each city and just beat back the ponies forces without even the slightest of effort. ponies may be just a bit lax when it comes to fighting but they have shield spells and have a ton of enchanted items that can counteract their attacks pretty easily.

lastly, from what I could find, their was no actual main story. it ended up being a bunch of short stories that take place inside the FoE universe. so not only does it have no main plot, but it has no real depth to it. on a scale of one to ten, I give this group a five. if I can find a main story or somebody can show me one then I may give it an extra star. the reason why is because im not a big fan of torture slave clop or any type of story with that in it. now don't get me wrong, the writing was very professionally done with very little if any serious errors in its work but i just cant stand that in a fic. I know that some people who are a fan of it will disagree with this and you are free to do so.
thanks for reading this blog post and have a good day everypony.

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