My newest Magnum Opus! · 4:09am Oct 14th, 2014
If you've been wondering why updates are a little slow as of late, it's because I've been carefully crafting the best piece of fiction I've ever written. Now, for whatever reason, no one saw fit to recognize this genius and allow me to publish it as-is in its own story, so I shall share it this way.
*ahem*
Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie were in lesbians with each other and banged all day and all night all over Ponyville and it was super sexy because Pinkie made Fluttershy into an exhibitionist. The End.
Eh? Eh?
Too many uses of the word "an", and it was far too long to hold the reader's attention. I felt there was too much focus on the scenery and world-building when we are all here for the characters. 10/10 Five-Stars
I've never seen such a masterpiece. Tears of amazement are streaming down my face and I cannot stop. I will tell my childrens children about this.
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