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  • 182 weeks
    Quick Update

    I do apologize for not getting the next chapter of The Light of a Candle out, but I've been preparing for the upcoming move and just haven't made the time to write. I've been debating on which perspective to go with and it's been kind of annoying.

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  • 184 weeks
    Who's on Eekum Bokum?

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  • 185 weeks
    Chapter 20 Update (I promise, it's the last one)

    Chapter is now being beaten to death like the dead horse topics we love to argue over. Pick a topic, and I'll drag out the corpse.

    Should be out tonight!

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  • 185 weeks
    Chapter 20 Update

    3300 words so far. I haven't forgotten. There were some changes I wanted to work through for one of the characters. I was not happy with the original concept and decided to delve a bit into Greek myth for inspiration. I hope you like it when I do publish the chapter. It's not done. There's one last bit to do for it before I ship it off to my editors for ridicule. I do apologize for the delay, but

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  • 186 weeks
    Picked Up a Real Estate Agent

    And so it begins...
    The great house hunt of our time.

    I'm super excited being able to go out and buy a home after two years of paying rent!

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Sep
2nd
2014

Foals Chapter 1 Teaser · 8:55am Sep 2nd, 2014

Unedited, subject to change.

Antares and Zaniah were not the most quiet brother and sister duo to have ever graced the face of Equestria, but neither were they the loudest. They were a day old and nestled comfortably in between their mother’s legs and against her barrel. They sported cloth diapers, courtesy of Celestia who had spent weeks practicing on life-sized foal dolls. She had not slept at all during the night, half-dozing and half inhaling their scents. Her children were her life now and she never felt happier.

Luna had announced their arrival into the world, though the twins could not have cared less. They had tried their hooves at standing soon after they were born. Celestia had taken herself from her bed and gently placed her foals on the floor. They wobbled, staggered, and fell often, but they eventually found their hooves. With flopping steps, they made their way to their mother, bumping into each other often as they made the staggering journey of twenty feet like a pair of drunken sailors seeking out their next ale house.

Every step they took, her voice was there, cooing and encouraging, a soft song in their young ears. Antares was already smiling up at his mother, not really paying attention to where his hooves fell. His sister stared at the floor as though it was a bitter enemy, making mewling little cries and not at all happy with venturing into the unknown.

Before Zaniah could panic and break down into a fit, she was at her mother’s hooves, shivering from the horror of the journey. It had been so far!

But, that had been the pinnacle of the evening yesterday and the tired trio were content to sleep on a clean bed made so by Celestia’s magic. With her foals now in the light of day, she lifted her self-imposed magical restrictions and to some relief. After a feeding Antares and Zanaiah, Celestia had put to practice all that training in properly placing diapers on a foal with the confidence of a grizzled sergeant.

She only had to redo Antares’ diaper once.

So, the morning found her waking to her foals curled up against her belly and between her legs. Celestia had not slept a wink. Even as she had dozed, she remained alert, her ears swiveling to the slightest of sounds.

I just wanted to let you guys know this story is far from dead.

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Comments ( 1 )

Love this story keep up the good work

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