Jun
11th
2012
FORMAL REQUEST OF APPRENTICSHIP · 1:10am Jun 11th, 2012
OH GOD WHAT AM I DOING I HAVE TOO MANY STORIES AND TOO LITTLE TIME
Hello all. This is Foxi, and I'm asking for help.
That's right; the guy who likes to work alone is actually asking for help. <.>
I need at least one user to help me with ideas for chapters to get my stories started.
In order to qualify, give me a link to ONE of your stories or type up a short story in the comments. The opening closes when I have two people I've accepted, or in three days from right now (June 10th, 2012, 9:06 PM Eastern Time). If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask them!
well i would offer up my creative juices to help but alas i have enough on my plate as it were with my college work and every thing else
I'll try my best, though this will just be off the top of my head and might not be good.
Two brothers, one of dark, the other of light; fight an endless battle to see who is the strongest. The brother of light fights for the freedom of all living things, while the brother of darkness fights to consume all in his never ending shadow. Fire and brimstone fall from the sky as the two clashed. Their battle kept going on for many years to come, until their strength failed them. Now both are lying dead on the earth, on the body of the brother of light life came to be. These were the Humes and the Celestials. On the body of the other brother, the evil Machina and the bloodthirsty Deamons came to be. Now these creatures continue the fight of the two brothers to this day, stuck forever in an endliss battle.
(Birth of Selonia)
So tell me, what do you think.
I'd be glad to assist you in your endeavors in writing, good sir.
Here is a link to my story. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17185/The-Dead-Trot%21
167715 :/ It's not the story I'd read, but it's OK. Got anything else?
167889 Eeeeeeeeeh.....Sorry, but the way you wrote that last chapter...A lot of it didn't fit together and you definitely rushed things.
167914 Humans have been sealed away for generations (5000 years) in an arc called pandora, Equestria/Earth is the resting place of this arc where the humans sleep in an eternal slumber, awaiting the day when someone or somepony would come and free them.
Humans and shades (soul eating shadows) where at war with each other, which left the planet a burning waistland, the government then decides to criogenicly freeze the last surviving humans in Pandora. As the humans slept, plant life begane to take over and a new race of beings came to be. Twilight Sparkle finds a map hidden in some ruins leading to this arc and she consults the princess about this.
Now back at the temple in a hidden room (Twilight is still talking with the princess at this time) a lone soul wanders into a hidden room in the temple (Chrysalis) which awakins a robot that is supposed to find Pandora and activate it to free the humans (Quote). Chrysalis seeing some usefullness in this robot takes him to her hive.
Meanwhile back in canterlot Celestia has Twilight search for this arc.
Back at the hive Quote tells Chrysalis of his true nature and she agrees to help him, at the cost of humanity working for her.
(You can probibly see where this is going)
167935 Now THIS I like! You have my vote, but let's wait a little longer to see if anyone else steps forward.
167961 I have plenty more writen down in my jurnal. I filled up all 300 pages with ideas and add ons.
167926
Yeah, you've got a point. Oh well. *shrug*
167972 You might be able to save yourself if you can come up with a story idea right now. :3
167976
Curses. I can't come up with good ideas on the spot like this! All the ideas I have I plan on using. I'm just thinking something along the lines of Pinkie wanting to learn how to be lady-like from Rarity to prepare for the Gala. That's all I got, for now.
168009 I pinkie promise I wont steal your ideas. If you're nervous about others taking them, you could message me. That idea doesn't sound to good in my opinion.
168055
I've always been a little paranoid about that. Call it what you wish, I just find it to be one of my "quirks" or something of that matter. But I can trust a Pinkie promise as much as the next guy. I have multiple ideas that can put that little charade to shame in a heartbeat, so since you Pinkie Promised not to steal them, I can share a few.
168072 Yay! :D