Updates and sneak peek?? · 4:29am Aug 15th, 2014
Hello guys! Red here.
So, chapter 13 is ready and is undergoing edition, so I'm not sure when I'll release it, but I was thinking... Maybe I could give a small sneak peek? So, yeah... Here's the chapter 13 sneak peek:
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"Golden Flame, I thought you were busy with your team," he said. The bright yellow Pegasus nodded.
"Yes, I was. But you know how the lads are, fast and efficient." He looked at the map. "What are you doing out here?"
Davis passed him the map. "I'm looking for defensive positions to build fortifications. We have just seven days for the changelings to reach us, and I want to be prepared with the best I can do." Golden Flame nodded.
"I think it's a bright idea. I can see here you are making a line of defensive fortifications every kilometer or so," the Pegasus said. Davis nodded.
"Yes. I'm planning on making fifteen of them, each one a mile if difference between each other," he said. "So far I've a seen only seven good positions, the others are... well enough yet not good enough."
Golden Flame scratched his neck. "Well, maybe I could see one easier from the sky. If you want, of course," he said. Davis looked at him.
"That is a brilliant idea. Please do that, I'll be down here looking for some myself. When you find one come and tell me."
The captain saluted smiling. "Aye, captain!" he said in a perfect imitation of a sailor. Davis laughed and Golden Flame took flight, looking for the position. Davis looked back onto his map.
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So, what do you guys think? There's not much going on that chapter, though. Maybe I could give you a sneak peek of chapter 14?
Would you like to have one of that chapter or you'd prefer to wait??
Chapter 14 is halfway through, but there's some very good parts I have already finished. So, if you guys would like one as well, tell me in the comments.
Red~
interesting
Wow Red. I can really see that you enyojing the writting. You make it look easy.
2372047 thank you!!!!!
2372130 you welcome
2376062 thank you, very much appreciated. Writing us my hobby and my passion, I'd never stop writing. I feel it also like a way to repay those that have given me great stories to read.