I tried so hard to sound posh in my writing that I'm actually a bit embarrassed from reading it just now. I can't believe that that's the first impression I've been giving people. 
Aug
14th
2014
Quick note: Updated the description to An Expedition to the Crystal Forest · 4:50am Aug 14th, 2014
I didn't feel that the old description was doing the story any justice, (it barely covered anything about the story at all) so I changed it.
If you were interested in the story from my old (crap) description, I'd urge you to check out the new one so you have an idea of what's to come.
Side note: It would be nice if I could get an editor for An Expedition to the Crystal Forest to help make sure that sentences make sense, the pacing isn't wacky, and that I'm including detail where it's desirable. So if you're interested, attach a letter to a brick and throw it through my window. (or PM me)
