Story Promotion: More than Dreams · 8:54pm Jul 31st, 2014
This is a story that I helped to edit, and learned a lot in the process. I'm not so good at portraying and personalizing conflict and making a tense moment.
Mind's Eye is. This is how to do tension.
If you enjoy TwiDash with more than a touch of tension, please go read this.
I really enjoyed editing this story.
More than Dreams
Trust is a funny thing.
Why hadn't she trusted her parents? Her brother? Her sister-in-law?
Why was she so afraid to tell them the truth?
Why couldn't she just tell them that she loved mares? Loved Rainbow Dash?
Fear is a funny thing.
You really made this one shine. Thank you.
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You're welcome. It was a pleasure to do so, and let me repay some of the help you've given me on Ghost, Mother of the Moon and Fluffy Moon.
And Doors.