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canisloopis


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  • 480 weeks
    Starting up again

    I forgot how easy and hard this writing thing is. Coming up with content is pretty easy for me. Typing it out is pretty easy for me. The hard part is editing it satisfactorily and potentially maintaining continuity. I could really use someone to bounce Ideas off of. I posted a chapter earlier today and already have another 2100 words written in the next chapter.

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  • 499 weeks
    [no title]

    I'm very excited. My stories are now both in the positive as far as upvotes vs. downvotes. In forced Derek finally starts his transformation to pony, will it go smoothly? Probably not, that wouldn't be a very interesting story :) I'm very excited about the things that are about to start happening in Forced Perspective.

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  • 503 weeks
    Chapter 6 of Forced Perspective

    I'm very excited one of my stories finally broke even on upvotes vs downvotes. I'm working on chapter 6 of Forced Perspective at the moment and will try to have it out by the end of the weekend depending on my editor's availability. I really want to reveal Derek's new name but the story must progress further before it makes sense for him to give up Derek. I'm very excited about this new chapter,

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  • 504 weeks
    looking for feedback

    Right now I have two stories that kind of budded from the same idea. I wrote story 1 (changing perspective) and rushed to the clop. I got a lot of feedback saying that the grammar was terrible (which it was, I intend to fix it at some point but right now I think adding new content is more important than fixing up the old stuff) and a few saying that I hadn't developed my main character.

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  • 511 weeks
    Here goes chapter one of my new story

    Lets see if this one ends up any better than the last one. I'm pretty disappointed with my first attempt. So i listened to all of the criticism and made a second attempt. Wish me luck!

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Jul
11th
2014

Totaly confused · 4:07am Jul 11th, 2014

I'm baffled. I have a story i want to tell, but i'm running into brick walls with my ability to tell it. It's quite frustrating. Maybe i should write the whole thing out, then worry about editing later?

I have some people telling me to add more detail to certain scenes while other say chop them out completely. I guess i'm finding out first hand you can't please everyone. Maybe i should try to just to tell my story as best i can, taking criticism and applying it in the future instead of trying to retrofit every comment i get and new thing i learn. I would make more progress at least...

But if i take that approach will anyone keep reading to the later chapters when things improve? Should I end this story early and save my good ideas for later when I've worked out all of the kinks?

I feel i have the story, the capacity to learn, and the motivation to put together something great, i'm just not sure who i should be trying to learn from...

If i spend all my time editing and re editing the same 3 chapters will anyone be interested when i finally publish or will they be so sick of proof reading my stuff that they'll be sick of it?

Thank you blog, you've helped me think this through. I'll tell the story the way I want and take the criticism i feel is most fitting. I'll rewrite what i want and have a product i'm happy with at the end. I can always tweak things later. If anyone else enjoys my story, all the better. If not, at least i'll have done something i can look back on.

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