Revisions on "Stars of Darkness"

One of my biggest projects in the past several months has been to re-read "The Stars of Darkness" and edit/revise it. I started with the simple desire to find and eliminate all rogue commas and spelling mistakes but as I read it aloud to my son (which was, incidentally, a FANTASTIC way to edit a story) I ended up changing quite a bit of the story. Entire scenes are now changed or re-worded to more accurately reflect what I wanted to say, and in many cases I changed the structure to flow more easily. In short, I took my favorite story and made it better than it was before! (I had the technology, apparently.)

My plan is to start taking down the old chapters of "Stars" and replace them with the new and improved chapters very soon, so any of you who are interested in re-reading the story and telling me if it flows better or worse, or simply even if you like it more or less than you did before, I would encourage feedback on that front! I will post here as I get them done to let you all know how progress is going, and you can do what you like with that information!

Also no, I haven't given up on WMHL but this summer has turned into a big grabby-fest for my writing attention and coupling that with writer's block and super cool video games just isn't a good mix for creativity. I'm slowly pulling myself out of this miasma of lethargy, but it's slow going. Don't give up hope, and I promise you won't be disappointed.

~D4ft