Jun
18th
2014
Call for Editors · 8:36pm Jun 18th, 2014
The next Chapter of "The Harmony Arcana" is coming along nicely, but it might still be a while before I release it, [insert lazy excuse of how busy I've been here]. In the meantime I really would like it if someone could either volunteer to, or point me in the direction of someone who can, look over my work thus far and critique what is already there. I realize it's over 100,000 words by now, but I haven't gotten any real thorough constructive criticism for it, despite my constant requests for it in the author's notes. So hit me up if you're willing and able.
TLDR: I need someone to tear my long ass fanfiction a new one and tell me what's wrong with it.
I'll be honest, through what I've read there really isn't much wrong with it. There's the occasional grammar error or spelling error but those can be found and fixed really easily... Then again I'm not that good a critic. But that's really all I could see wrong at this time.
If you still need someone, I can help.
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Can you link me to a few stories that you've proofread (preferably without any other editors) so that I can see what you can do?
3382278 Well, to be fair, what I've proofread so far is a Phoenix Wright fanfic that hasn't been published, and a chapter of a rather subpar Pokemon crossover, but I'll send you a link if I see that my proofread has been posted.
AAAAND the fic isn't on his page for some reason. But I'll suggest some edits and if you want, you can deny them.