Major Revisions · 9:23am Jun 18th, 2014
Hello everybody, this is the author Sonik here, and I have a bit of news for all of you wonderful, beautiful people. I've gotten many comments about how little sense Chapter Eight: A Bad Memory, Part I of my story The Greatest Show of Kindness made, and I completely agreed with you. I just didn't know how to fix it very well and still keep the same setting until yesterday, when I gained some inspiration from a YouTube video on how to do it. Looking back, it was incredibly simple and I feel a dumb for not realizing it sooner, but hey, everybody has those moments, and this was one for me. So, I have changed and revised the chapter to a shorter length, unfortunately, but it has a better quality and makes more sense. I would like all of you amazing people to take another look at it and tell me if I've made it better from an audience perspective!
The next chapter should be up in about a week, as I am currently looking for a job so I can rack up some funds. Thank all of you for reading this story!
