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Ocean Heart


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  • 266 weeks
    First Big Edit Spree

    So a few chapters are done and edited. To explain some changes, Spike and Nashta are now wingless properly, so a lot has changed in the series of events involving them. Sombra is more of a consistent dick rather than a spastic one with a lot clearer goals and better transitions/interactions. I'd love it if ya'll checked it out.

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  • 267 weeks
    I guess im fixing that old story

    Im alive, question is, was I ever dead in the first place?

    I hear all the problems my writing has. I like to think I've gotten better. So Im taking the stuff there now and revising a lot in as few sessions as possible to keep the mentality I need to have consistent action and motivations. I got super off track with what the story was and want to fix that.

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  • 335 weeks
    So since Fim won't update y'all

    New chapter up. Revision on the old one. Fim doesn't want to spam inboxes since its publish date was back in june...like two years ago. Finally back into it. Who knows where it goes from here, but I feel like there might be a small difference in my writing styles...

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  • 380 weeks
    It's almost Easter

    You all know what that meeeans...

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  • 412 weeks
    Recent chapter

    It sucked. It made me realized I had a huge continuity error and it tore my whole plot apart. Im going to rewrite it and adjust that plot to fit the error so that it wont change the whole story. Im very sorry for being so late admitting this. I was afraid of failing and just ignored it, praying it wouldnt be noticed. Im a bad guy. But I'll be working hard to fix it! Taking the chapter down for

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Jun
12th
2014

Head cannon time · 2:38am Jun 12th, 2014

So, I recently had to do a bit more research into the Budweiser Clydesdales for the upcoming chapter and realized I kinda sorta screwed myself on Jake's design. I didn't realize that Budweiser Clydesdales had a look when I was drawing up the plans for this story and now I'm too deep to go back and change it so it can match the true look of a brown coat and white stripe down the length of the face, the white mane was right, black spots a little something to define him from the group..but his coat is covered in white spots! Well he would stick out like a sore thumb pullin that cart with the dalmatian- waaaaaaait..

So! In summary, for the sake of my own obsession with making sense with the source material, Jake is indeed a Budweiser Clydesdale...but the reason he goes to shows is because he is a new guy in an ad campaign that has the dalmatian finding another misfit buddy with spots in the sea of single colors. Its cute, adds depth and matches my own idea of how marketing works..........maybe not marketing...

Little Jake and Moe the dog, best buds that go against all expectations...share a beer with your bud during this years superbowl...Budweiser.....

I'm totally available for hire ad agencies.

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