Civil Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones · 1:55am Jun 2nd, 2014
It's new chapter release time to Equestria: A History Revealed!
Check it out below!
Chapter 21: Along the Crossroads of History: The Battle of Canterlot.
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There are long stretches of recollections of the battle from a soldier in the battle in this chapter. This may be the first time a dominant voice in the story other than Loose Change, is present. Of course, Loose Change speaks up a little in the quote itself, and she returns as the primary narrator once it's all said and done.
You can probably tell, but this was originally the makings of a different story. It's not like I copied an old story of mine into here or something; it was fully written and made for this only. I had the concept of this originally as a side story of sorts, as an addition to this tale (and to make Loose Change's fanfic hyprocite remark all the more biting), until I decided just to work it into the main story. I wanted to provide something new to the readers too. Such a huge tone and writing shift hopefully pays off! And as an author, writing in an essay-style is fun and everything, but it's always nice to try some new things when it comes to writing.
Hopefully you all like what I did with this! If not, don't worry, this chapter will be the last one in which this happens. It's just something I wanted to try. It's Loose Change all the way through from now on, baby.
