Story #6: Rainbow Dash, Racer, Athlete, Daredevil, Diplomat · 8:50pm May 27th, 2014
So Rainbow Dash, Racer, Athlete, Daredevil, Diplomat. What can I say? I took a little brake from my crusader's line and brought out one of my stories from my Rainbow Dash line. Like most of my stories this was written in my head between when sessions one and two and I just updated what I needed to, to accommodate sessions 2+. Not that this one needed much changing considering how isolated most of it is.
And then I found being a visual thinker was less then helpful for some part of the story. Let's just say that a chain of events that played out in my mind like a quick montage didn't translate to very good reading in text form. So I wound up reworking those parts a fair amount witch in turn made the final chapter get much longer then I'd intended... I swear someday I will learn how to write a short story...
Also, remind me never to try to write zebras talking again. That was painful trying to come up with what I did, and even then I know I'm stretching the rules of off rhyme quite a bit to get them to say what I needed them to.
Until next time, have fun out there.