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  • 50 weeks
    Probably the last update on Smashing Down for the foreseeable future

    When I last posted about it, a year ago, I talked about how the Invasion of Ukraine left me unwilling to write it because of the central focus: The Russian team that is the primary POV of the story. Back in 2020, I even started preliminary work on a rewrite, but that was before the invasion, before I started to read up more on military equipment, and before I improved further as a writer.

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  • 111 weeks
    Rewriting Smashing Down: How the Pandemic and the Invasion of Ukraine smothered most of my will to rewrite it

    The title is descriptive enough, but I don't think I need to tell any of you how rough 2020 was. For me, 2020 and 2021 were both years of stress, near-homelessness, loss, joblessness, and many other difficulties. Writing slowed, and then stopped.

    And then, once I was finally pulling myself together, the invasion of Ukraine happened.

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  • 197 weeks
    On Rewriting Smashing Down, And Writing Again

    I have tried thrice to rewriting Smashing Down, or to pick up where I last left off. Every time, I am reminded that the story was written when I was sixteen, in 2013. My writing back then was decent enough to get attention, but I look back on a lot of it with embarrassment, for a large variety of reasons.

    Smashing Down, as it stands, cannot be rewritten.

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  • 322 weeks
    Sometimes, to make something better, you have to burn it down first...

    I last posted an update nearly two years ago stating that I would be editing Smashing Down. That turned out to be a lie, a task I gave up on several months and barely a couple chapters in. Within that time, I have become a far better writer, and thought up far better ways to introduce the story and setting in a way that will both make more sense and make for a far more interesting story than the

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  • 408 weeks
    On the future of Smashing Down

    I should warn you that the following will contain criticism of my writing and my plans for what to do with Smashing Down.

    It was one of my first stories, and certainly one that gained a fair bit of popularity. It even hit the front page a few times on FimFiction. Plenty of people have enjoyed it, and it maintains a very good like ratio.

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May
16th
2014

The Origins of Smashing Down · 9:27pm May 16th, 2014

Smashing Down as a story originally came to be as an afterthought. Being that I knew most of my stories at the time were terrible (and that I was still doing them for the sake of finishing them), I wanted to make a truly good story, one with... Well... An actual plot rather than a cliché storm. And thus, I did what I always do when looking for ideas:

I started a video game.

While the Moscow level of Ace Combat: Assault Horizon is not particularly my favorite, most certainly because I dislike the helicopter missions, it does present a challenge at the higher difficulty levels. I played through it as normal, nothing in particular coming to my mind, until the final cutscene of the helicopter section.

A bright orange missile, the plot devices of the entire game, streaks by and annihilates the center of Moscow, and the camera cuts to a Mi-24 literally being thrown to the ground by the blast. At that point, I said "Hold it, what the hell happened to be people inside?"

I brainstormed for a bit, before coming up with a basic list of characters: The startlingly racist and nationalist Kozlov, the calm and distant pilot Sokolov, and the level-headed / rash contrast of Lieutenant Vasilyev and his Sergeant. I had originally planned them as a contrast to Equestria: I would have them run around, get into trouble, fight their way out, and stay on the run.

For the first six chapters, that was my entire plan. I published the story, and was immediately inundated with what was, to me, an excessive amount of readers. Don't judge me for that: I never expected to be popular, and this was a surprise to me. And thus, the story involved. I put in a token American force inside of a single helicopter for contrast, but their characters never really panned out. They were lost to the story later on.

And then I felt the urge to add in more. The characters needed something, a goal to work towards. Captain Volkov was the first point at which I said "I am not adding any more people". I failed. The story grew as quickly as my ambition for it did, and soon enough I had gathered together a massive force, along with a fairly basic plotline.

No, that does not mean that I have no idea what I am doing. The best explanation would be that I have only half of an idea of what I want to do, and that the rest writes and ties itself in. Yes, I am aware that this is not precisely good. But it has worked well so far, so I won't complain too badly.

And with that, thank you for being patient and seeing me through this. While I would still happily write without such a supporting group of people, your comments and feedback always make my day better. In a way, you are the ones who have made the story: I've just helped it along.


As a side note, the next chapter should be out some time soon.

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Comments ( 6 )

Lol I love that cliché "You"te all the reason this story was made" bit at the end. Lol twas funny.

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Well, during the three-month hiatus that ended in September, that was literally the only thing that kept me from cancelling the story. Fans of this are also the only reason I currently have a editor/pre-reader, and have improved my writing skills enough to be able to write it.

You all influenced this as much as I did.

2118157 lol nice, its nice to hear a story getthat popular!:scootangel:

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Well, popular for me. About 1.5k views, so that's pretty good.

2118536 Been with this story since pretty much its first chapter. I am still on edge every time I finish a new one!
Can't wait to see what your plans are for the next chapter!:moustache:

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