Calling all Editors/Prereaders! · 12:31am May 2nd, 2014
Ok! Listen up! I have been working on a new story for about 3 weeks now, and the first chapter's done! But, I need some outside feedback before I post it, otherwise there may be a numerous amount of splling nd grmmer erors littered throughout the chapter! So, what I need you to do is PM me if you're interested in becoming a pre-reader and/or an editor! In exchange, I'll mention your name in the description of the story and every single chapter in the story! That means more fame for you and correct sentences for me!
Even if you don't want to edit, I'm going to also ask that you recommend some editors for me so that I can message them and see if they're willing to help me with my project. My goal for my new story is at least 15 likes! I'm hoping that the concept of the story will pull viewers in and the quality of the writing will keep them in!
P.S. I'm also looking for someone to commission and image from, but that's at the back of my to-do list.
Title: Ignis
Description:
New Canterlot. Set into stone on the planet Solaris, the five-century old city has seen better days. Since the Elements of Harmony disappeared 427 years ago, the grand capital of all ponydom sits in a cesspool of corruption, thievery and greed. The rich heavily overpower the poor, both in magic and money. Food is expensive if it hasn't been corrupted by the Nightmare already. There is no responsible government, and the elected officials of every district have virtually no say in what laws take hold in the overpopulated city.
Relations between the Humans and Ponies don't fare well either. Since Earth's demise, the Human race as a whole struggle to find somewhere within the universe that accept them, somewhere to call home. But, even as solid as the alliance between the Humans and Ponies were when they made first contact, those days have been long gone. The Royal Sisters are no longer around to play referee in their game of tug-of-war, and since the new advancements to the space age no being bears no arms.
There are small pockets of hope within New Canterlot, however. Groups such as the Party Patriot fight ruthlessly against the repressive political forces surrounding New Canterlot's government. The Lunar Rebellion, led by fanatics of the late Moon Princess constantly cause trouble for the Blueblood military. The biggest of them all, however, are the Valoran, the strongest rebellion group in the seventh cosmos. They take up any task against the corrupt Equestrians the own the city, crush their power little by little and give support to all who have suffered under their might wrath.
And that's where I come in. I'm a part of the third squadron of militia from the Valoran who are on a mission to take out on of New Canterlot's Arcane Energy Silos, or A.E.S. for short. We're only one squad of two, but other Valoran troups are keeping busy most of the Blueblood military busy halfway across the city with bombing runs in the HONESTY district. The plan is for our squadron to plant a bomb on one of the major power lines within the silo and get out safely.
Of course, destiny never accounts for plans.
